A Capital But Simple Nation

A CAPITAL BUT SIMPLE NATION! -Dharga Nagar Safa In the Alphabet nation, Live, Twenty six people, All have capital, But, Live in simple, A is in lead and in wisdom, Z is lazy and last as Zero!

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Sam Toil

Date: 4/27/2014 8:50:00 AM

Hi Muhammad! Yes, indeed, this is a simple nation you describe. And like your very creative, witty metaphor here, we in real nations do stratify ourselves into classes and demographic groups that, at least in the plurality, never seem to change. A lovely write. Peace....Sam

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 4/27/2014 11:19:00 AM

Many thanks,Sam,May all our hands joint together to build a our dream world.Again a big thank.,

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 4/27/2014 5:56:00 AM

witty write Muhammad enjoyed it hugs

Joseph May

Date: 4/26/2014 7:00:00 PM

Very creative write...

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 4/26/2014 7:09:00 PM

Thank you.