A Canopy of Green

The gurgling water laughs out loud, trickling over rocks in a brook. Away from the bustle and crowd, the gurgling water laughs out loud. And flows along fields freshly plowed, maintaining a countryside look. The gurgling waters laugh out loud trickling over rocks in a brook. Maintaining a countryside look adds serenity to the scene near a boardwalk that time forsook; maintaining a countryside look. And sunbeams find each dappled nook under a canopy of green. Maintaining a countryside look, adds serenity to the scene. Under a canopy of green, shifting shadows subdue sunlight. And everything seems so serene under a canopy of green. Dreams go where fantasies have been, as imagination takes flight. Under a canopy of green, shifting shadows subdue sunlight.
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Date: 2/25/2018 8:15:00 PM
Your triolet is beautifully executed. I love your first line "the gurgling waters laugh out loud". We almost want to laugh along because, phonetically the word GURGLING is plain funny. Lovely, Emile.
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Date: 2/26/2018 8:19:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, I do so appreciate your visits. Emile.
Date: 7/10/2015 10:11:00 PM
Love the imagery in this, Emile! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/11/2015 9:52:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate all your support. Emile.
Date: 7/7/2015 3:02:00 PM
Emile, A lovely win, Love **SKAT**
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/7/2015 7:09:00 PM
Thanks SKAT, as always your comments are most welcome. Emile.
Date: 7/7/2015 2:06:00 PM
Emile, Congrats on your win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/7/2015 2:29:00 PM
Thanks Linda, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 7/7/2015 8:06:00 AM
I like the use of repetition. Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/7/2015 9:36:00 AM
Thanks Richard, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 7/7/2015 3:50:00 AM
Wonderful triolet Emile! Congrats on ur win!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/7/2015 9:37:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Sharma, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 3/21/2015 7:38:00 PM
Oh I want to see GREEN LOL it snowed all day yesterday & this morning BUT it did warm up & most is melted now! Light & Love Emile
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/22/2015 12:40:00 PM
Thanks Debbie, like you I am so looking forward to green. Emile.
Date: 3/18/2015 8:50:00 AM
I love your repeating first line on your first set. :) triolet is one of my fave forms but I did it just once. :)! I like the imagery you put me into. I feel rested and refreshed.. :)!//olive eloisa
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Date: 3/18/2015 9:13:00 AM
Thanks so much Olive, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 3/18/2015 12:01:00 AM
I just liked the poem, but reading the comments below, yes I see how you did this, great!!!!!
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Date: 3/18/2015 12:00:00 AM
Beautiful, and I sure cant wait for spring!!!
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Date: 3/18/2015 9:14:00 AM
Thanks Arthur, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 3/17/2015 3:58:00 PM
wow, it's very interesting how you used the one line from the middle part to make the first line of the next one. Is that what it means to "triple it?" I can see Francine likes it because she is asking for the date, and you got the date on it. Good. It's gonna do well! I just love triolet form
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Date: 3/17/2015 4:23:00 PM
Thanks Andres, yes that is how you link a Triolet. Glad you enjoyed it. Emile.
Date: 3/17/2015 2:11:00 PM
psst, date written on the entry please
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Date: 3/17/2015 12:09:00 PM
I struggle to write one - you have written three delightful triolets - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/17/2015 12:57:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I look forward to reading yours. Emile.
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