Nigel Fawcett Poet Quintain (English)

A Candle On the Sea

For you I'll make an ocean
Where you'll never have to hide
I'll fill it with devotion
And pour love upon the tide

        For you these waters bide...

The waves they will embrace you
On that warm supporting sea
The current, it will guide you through
And bring your flame to me

        The things you always wanted...you will see

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Pete Yuhas January 3, 2016 at 1:44 PM Very nice write Nigel, hope the New Year brings many more. Pete Yuhas Nigel Fawcett January 3, 2016 at 1:48 PM Thank you Pete for your kind words. Happy New Year.. Nigel

Chitra Lakhera November 20, 2008 at 9:31 PM Oh my my, this is so romantic! So much love in there. I agree with all, lucky lady:) Very touchy. Love, Chitra

Carrie Richards November 20, 2008 at 5:33 PM You have such a sweet romantic side! Lucky lady out there, my, oh, my! ~ Carrie

Sharon Winter November 20, 2008 at 4:59 PM You are making someone feel very happy. I sense a special kind of love in the air. : ) I don't blame her, this beautiful write shows what a giving, caring soul you are. Truly heartwarming. Love, Shar

Barbara Gorelick November 20, 2008 at 4:22 PM Perfect poem..I had a bad afternoon and this has made me cry...your woman is so lucky..BG

Christopher Higgins November 20, 2008 at 3:59 PM I love the ending of this poem Nigel. The promise that must be kept...letting them know if they take a chance it will all workout. Beautiful write Nigel.