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A Candle In the Storm

Candle's frightened flame
listening to loud lightning
seeks sound of silence



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By:kashinath karmakar(1st March,2011)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/24/2013 1:13:00 AM

Kash, thanks for your comments. My last two of the day. and time to get off here. I didn't dare see your poem because I think it was for my contest and I am trying not to see any of my entries till the last minute . Hope all is well with you. Luv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/10/2011 7:45:00 AM

Hey, I came back to the poem that is now the last one we see on your four pages. I remember this one. I bet you now know why it is not the kind of haiku Debs likes!! You have learned so much since you went to the haiku site and now you are placing in a lot of the contests. I'm glad you thought i was JUST like THAT in my mission statement. That's what I was going for. Now let's see YOURS!!! Luv, Andrea

George Aul

Date: 3/2/2011 12:46:00 PM

I like it....good luck in the contest......George

John Freeman

Date: 3/2/2011 9:06:00 AM

Great alliterations Kashinath, surely do well in Chris' contest. Agape, Moses

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 3/2/2011 7:19:00 AM

Very nice Haiku...love your alliteration...Good luck in the contest...Jimmy

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/2/2011 6:12:00 AM

This is an intriguing write Kash, wishing you all the best for Chris's contest.. I really enjoy your creativity ;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2011 11:56:00 PM

Great alliteration, my friend. I need to think of something fast!!! Glad I came here right before going off because I had no idea you posted something new. nighty night now!

Fabiyas M V

Date: 3/1/2011 10:52:00 PM

A candle in the storm tells a lot,Kashinath.Nicely written.Belated thanks for congrats.You also deserve the same.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/1/2011 4:59:00 PM

Superb visual of a candle in the storm, kashinath

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/1/2011 2:06:00 PM

You're really a brilliant writer, Kashinath. This is a highly creative haiku! I will be home later this week and will have more time to read and comment then.