A Calm Evening

A calm evening 
million mosquitos of the forest 
are arriving to a small lake 
in an attempt
of reflecting themselves 
in a thin summer-ice 
on the water surface
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 8, 2010 at 7:09 AM
I really felt good reading your comment.
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December 8, 2010 at 7:02 AM
I am reading some very amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am glad yours was among the poetry I was able to read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Haldor. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Holiday Season. Love,Carol
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