Meru Groen Poet Rhyme

A Calm Come Snowing

The turning of years, the drying of tears.
The blessed of days, when the sunlight plays.

The swirling visions, righteous decisions.
The rusting armor, soldier turned farmer.

The choir humming, a godly coming.
The eyes of knowing, a calm come snowing.

date:7/13/21
(bite-size poem no 12 contest)

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Krish Radhakrishna July 20, 2021 at 10:32 PM choir of humming, a godly coming! I like that! congrats on your win! Meru Groen August 17, 2021 at 6:35 PM Thank you Krish, It just crowded into the poem, thanks for your comment.

Line Gauthier July 19, 2021 at 11:08 AM Awesome structure, great message. Congrats on top win, Meru ~ Meru Groen August 17, 2021 at 6:37 PM Thank You, sweet Line, I appreciate it very much!

Joanna Daniel July 15, 2021 at 10:13 PM Beautiful poetry, Meru, congratulations:) Meru Groen July 17, 2021 at 3:25 PM thank you, I really appreciate your comment.

Rama Balasubramanian July 15, 2021 at 10:35 AM Congratulations Meru Groen July 17, 2021 at 3:25 PM Thank you, for your comment.

Terry Miller July 15, 2021 at 4:31 AM A beautiful poem, congratulations. Meru Groen July 17, 2021 at 3:26 PM Thank you Terry, very much appreciated.

John Lawless July 15, 2021 at 4:20 AM an excellent use of rhyming couplets tinged by the passing of time and life's experiences Meru Groen July 17, 2021 at 3:27 PM Thank you for the comment, I learned from it, thanks John.

Christuraj Alex July 15, 2021 at 4:00 AM Wow. It is a very beautiful Rhyme. Congratulations! Meru Groen July 17, 2021 at 3:28 PM Thank you for the comment, very sweet of you.