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A Calm Come Snowing

The turning of years, the drying of tears. The blessed of days, when the sunlight plays. The swirling visions, righteous decisions. The rusting armor, soldier turned farmer. The choir humming, a godly coming. The eyes of knowing, a calm come snowing. date:7/13/21 (bite-size poem no 12 contest)

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Date: 7/20/2021 10:32:00 PM
choir of humming, a godly coming! I like that! congrats on your win!
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Meru Groen
Date: 8/17/2021 6:35:00 PM
Thank you Krish, It just crowded into the poem, thanks for your comment.
Date: 7/19/2021 11:08:00 AM
Awesome structure, great message. Congrats on top win, Meru ~
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Meru Groen
Date: 8/17/2021 6:37:00 PM
Thank You, sweet Line, I appreciate it very much!
Date: 7/15/2021 10:13:00 PM
Beautiful poetry, Meru, congratulations:)
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Meru Groen
Date: 7/17/2021 3:25:00 PM
thank you, I really appreciate your comment.
Date: 7/15/2021 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations
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Meru Groen
Date: 7/17/2021 3:25:00 PM
Thank you, for your comment.
Date: 7/15/2021 4:31:00 AM
A beautiful poem, congratulations.
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Meru Groen
Date: 7/17/2021 3:26:00 PM
Thank you Terry, very much appreciated.
Date: 7/15/2021 4:20:00 AM
an excellent use of rhyming couplets tinged by the passing of time and life's experiences
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Meru Groen
Date: 7/17/2021 3:27:00 PM
Thank you for the comment, I learned from it, thanks John.
Date: 7/15/2021 4:00:00 AM
Wow. It is a very beautiful Rhyme. Congratulations!
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Meru Groen
Date: 7/17/2021 3:28:00 PM
Thank you for the comment, very sweet of you.

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