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A Call To All Soupers:Warning!

I just lost all thoughts
for what to write
an ode to all poets?
A political debate?
A cross country race rap?
Arg i feel so ashamed,
So dim Witted
Maybe You my
Poetry Pals
Will spit out 
All you think i should write
And ill for sure dedicate it to all yours=)

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William Kershaw

Date: 7/14/2009 10:56:00 PM

My friend, fear not that you may have writers block. Poetry is just our true thoughts and emotions expressed as if this were the world it should could or would be if the poet dared to speak it aloud. I've read your stuff and you have found your voice. We appreciate what you have shared with us and hunger for more. Keep writing. Please. Always, Will

Mary Duhart

Date: 7/5/2009 6:09:00 AM

Follow your heart my friend. I write about everyday experience. Sometimes someone may something and I'll say that will make a good poem. Your best writings will come from within so listen to your heart. Thanks for commenting on my work also.

Jay Loveless

Date: 7/2/2009 4:16:00 PM

Write About Something Crazy. How Bout You Clue Everyone In On New Mr. Crush =P Or Write About What Pain Ab Put You In. Write About Mama. Or How You Feel About Your Dad. Write About Not Behaving, Or About Your Little Brother. Write About Your Thoughts, Your Dreams, Me, Write About Yor Visions, Your Once Planned Future. Just Write <3

Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 7/2/2009 8:40:00 AM

write whatever is in you to write my dear, for writing is simply what it is, do not try to make it, be it for i have seen you a poet, and poets are simply writing, so write to write, nothing more nothing less, read my poem Perfect Things in Poetry, i think you would like it after reading tis :) all my love and with hopes you may again realize you power to write madison

Diane Christian

Date: 7/2/2009 2:35:00 AM

aww write what is in your heart my friend, it comes natural that way the flow goes better some how, I can only seem to write in simple form but I think of the things around me and how much people mean to me or how much God means to me and what I feel I write, you could pick a theme on love, parents, happy sad, love lus heartache, pain just a few ideas, the thoughts will come and when they do you will write fit for a king, God bless you from diane

Abe Lopez

Date: 7/1/2009 8:42:00 PM

I love writing about what i know best. family. hobbies, nature, art, and just observing your everyday surroundings. good luck my friend......alopez

Hyle Chu

Date: 7/1/2009 4:09:00 PM

Some days, I lose focus. My mind scatters and tunes into everything else. Those days, I soul search for my thoughts. Emily Dickenson wrote a poem about this. It's called "The Lost of Thought": "I FELT a clearing in my mind / As if my brain had split; / I tried to match it, / seam by seam, / But could not make them fit." You gave me an idea: I'm going to write about the soup. "Hai" is the short form for my name.