William Kelii Kekaula Poet Monoku

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A Call of the Child

a waned moon sliced a horizon~~a baby wakes~~and started cooing
waking a cote of doves~~jointly they answered the call~~in harmony


Original Date: 2019 December 28
Revised Date: 2019 December 29
ku duet Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Silent One


Howmanysyllables;
2 lines x 17 syllables per = 34 syllables total

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Line Gauthier January 8, 2020 at 7:57 PM Lovely imagery, William. Congrats on your podium finish. William Kelii Kekaula January 8, 2020 at 8:10 PM Thanks, Line, appreciate it and likewise to you as well~@wk

Eve Roper January 4, 2020 at 9:51 PM Congratulations on your in Silent One's contest. Hugs Eve William Kelii Kekaula January 4, 2020 at 10:00 PM I appreciate your time and thoughts, and my compliments likewise on first place~@wk

Andrea Dietrich January 4, 2020 at 5:53 PM this is adorable, William. Congrats on the win. William Kelii Kekaula January 4, 2020 at 7:34 PM Thanks again Andrea, and my compliments likewise on your top win~@wk

Sandra Adams January 4, 2020 at 11:33 AM lovely William... congrats on your win in the contest :) hugs William Kelii Kekaula January 4, 2020 at 11:56 AM Such generosity is welcoming Sandra, and my compliments likewise~@wk

Jenish Somadas January 4, 2020 at 10:48 AM Lol..This is cool..One of my favourite in this contest..Congrats on your placement.. William Kelii Kekaula January 4, 2020 at 11:54 AM It was a pleasure reading your thoughtful words Jenish, and my compliments likewise~@wk

Silent One January 4, 2020 at 7:12 AM Sounds love... glad you took Andrea's advice, such a star she is... Congratulations on your placement in the contest. William Kelii Kekaula January 4, 2020 at 7:23 AM Thanks, my poet friend for my placement~@wk

Andrea Dietrich December 29, 2019 at 4:43 PM so precious, William. By the way, he wants the second one written on one line. Go see the rules. (well , if you want to place high anyway) William Kelii Kekaula December 29, 2019 at 4:48 PM THANKS Andrea! I did originally until I saw Beth's (I think it was hers or thereafter) and changed it accordingly, hope she did change (or whomever--I can't recall?) Aloha always William