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a waned moon sliced a horizon~~a baby wakes~~and started cooing waking a cote of doves~~jointly they answered the call~~in harmony Original Date: 2019 December 28 Revised Date: 2019 December 29 ku duet Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One Howmanysyllables; 2 lines x 17 syllables per = 34 syllables total

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/8/2020 7:57:00 PM

Lovely imagery, William. Congrats on your podium finish.

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/8/2020 8:10:00 PM

Thanks, Line, appreciate it and likewise to you as well~@wk

Eve Roper

Date: 1/4/2020 9:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your in Silent One's contest. Hugs Eve

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/4/2020 10:00:00 PM

I appreciate your time and thoughts, and my compliments likewise on first place~@wk

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2020 5:53:00 PM

this is adorable, William. Congrats on the win.

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/4/2020 7:34:00 PM

Thanks again Andrea, and my compliments likewise on your top win~@wk

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/4/2020 11:33:00 AM

lovely William... congrats on your win in the contest :) hugs

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/4/2020 11:56:00 AM

Such generosity is welcoming Sandra, and my compliments likewise~@wk

Jenish Somadas

Date: 1/4/2020 10:48:00 AM

Lol..This is cool..One of my favourite in this contest..Congrats on your placement..

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/4/2020 11:54:00 AM

It was a pleasure reading your thoughtful words Jenish, and my compliments likewise~@wk

Silent One

Date: 1/4/2020 7:12:00 AM

Sounds love... glad you took Andrea's advice, such a star she is... Congratulations on your placement in the contest.

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/4/2020 7:23:00 AM

Thanks, my poet friend for my placement~@wk

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2019 4:43:00 PM

so precious, William. By the way, he wants the second one written on one line. Go see the rules. (well , if you want to place high anyway)

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/29/2019 4:48:00 PM

THANKS Andrea! I did originally until I saw Beth's (I think it was hers or thereafter) and changed it accordingly, hope she did change (or whomever--I can't recall?) Aloha always William