A Call From Hell

I stood in the check out line of a grocery store. Thinking of last nights events that still 
shakes me to the core....

       I felt I was being buried alive in a dark tomb.  I awoke with a start with a pounding 
heart and looked about the room.  Beads of perspiration trickled down my chest.  My eyes 
bulged like a man possessed.  I felt sick like I was going to vomit.  The nightmare frightened 
me more than I like to admit.  
       A strong sense of deja vu I couldn't quite understand.  I was startled by the ring of my 
cellphone on the nightstand.
       The static was drowning out the callers voice and what he was tryng to say.  The in and 
out of the voice sounded so far away.  I listened closely trying to hear and understand what 
he was saying, for it was clearly a man.
       He was asking me for help because he could not escape the place he was in.  He said 
the place was so hot the flames were burning off his skin!  I was about to hang up because 
obviously this guy was ill;  But within the next minute I would get an eternal chill.
       A frightening look could be seen in my eyes!  I felt the hair on the back of my neck 
rise.  He kept repeating my name like he knew me personally.  I then recognized his voice 
immediately!
       "Oh my this can't be so!"  It was the voice of my late friend who died three years ago!!!



Written for "A Rambling Poet's contest "Act 1, Scene 1"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Nelson Avatar
March 6, 2010 at 2:54 PM
this is well written
Augustus Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 1:45 PM
This is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for your comment about my poem. That's is quite and eerie feeling. To personally have that type of experience would be torture and a learning experience at the same time. Simply, "GET SAVED!". Great piece. Oh, and congratulations on your placement in the contest. It was intense and colourful from start to finish. Also, Audrey, thank you for sending the message on. I always need that extra encouragement with my writing.
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March 2, 2010 at 2:51 PM
Hi, Jimmy. First of all I thank you for your comments, second, wow! Your piece gave me goose bumps. I've seen a movie when I was a child I think it was from a Hitchcock series where the character was receiving phone calls and could hear nothing... the movie ended by showing the telephone wires fallen because of the storm ...and the other end was stuck in the grave of his or her deceased loved one. Spooky :) Love, Iolanda
Haick Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 5:24 PM
Like I said, already a mini movie, JAM....Great job as usual. Congratulations on your win in A Rambling Poet's sponsored contest! XOXOX....Peanut butter
Brown Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 9:37 AM
Congratulations on your win in ARPoet's "Act One Scene One" Contest ~Jimmy~. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 7:21 PM
Congrats Jimmy on your winning poem in the Act 1 Scene 1 contest.. an amazing write and a wonderful win for u to enjoy.. luv.. "Sweetheart" of P.S. Linda-Marie..
Haick Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 10:39 AM
This is already a short film, Jimmy!! You're such a great story teller. Can't wait to read your first novel!! Extraordinary talent... You know i love your stories..goes to my favs! Peanut butter
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