A Buzz In the Bedroom

You wait patiently in my bedroom,
for the dark when I climb into bed,
and that is when you make your move;
I know that you’re close to my head,
before touching my now naked body,
until you find a desirable spot,
and start sucking to your hearts desire -
damn mosquitoes ought to be shot!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Mcconnell Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 2:19 PM
Great write Lindsay and loved your finale! Take care, Blessings,Gordon
Laurie Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 10:06 PM
Hello Gordon ... I'm pleased you enjoyed this little piece of humour, but I still think mosquitoes should be shot - thank you Gordon - Lindsay
Adams Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 7:10 PM
Gotta hate em!! Gotta love the poem though!!! Great write. Very funny!!!....Pat
Laurie Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 11:08 PM
One tiny wee creature with a whining nature can and do send people insane. The poem is funny - mozzies NO! - thanks Mate - Lindsay
Mcguire Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 11:14 PM
:) FUNNY! HAD ME FOOLED!
Laurie Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 10:21 PM
G'day Timothy … yes it does tend to lean to a risqué conclusion, but mozzies always stuff that up at the best of times - thanks Timothy - Lindsay
Babcock Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 1:01 PM
So pesky those darn things. Just getting into that season. Got the bedding plants in the greenhouse and they are up now waiting for a nice day to plant. love phyl
Laurie Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 10:09 PM
Hi Phyllis ... they are very annoying. Our garden is reminding us that winter is not far away - Lindsay
Allison Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 10:42 AM
LOL Lindsay, its so so wonderful to see you back on the site with your witty lines, you have been sorely missed!!!. I'm buzzing with delight to read your hilarious poem:-) hugs jan xx
Laurie Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 6:27 PM
Thank you Jan. I never imagined that I'd be missed. Bloody mozzies - I'm not sure if I can get on line for the next three weeks. Lindsay
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