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A Busy Life Four Walls

a busy life. four walls lay out impressions of the day like solitaire: the king of ham and eggs, the queen’s late call and the ace of insomnia 05/15/2019 Writing Challenge 2, May 2019, Lind68868 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Dear Heart Theme: 1. a living scene Syllables Per Line: 6 8 8 6 8

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/16/2019 11:12:00 AM

'The ace of insomnia' - so descriptive, I imagine this will do well in the contest, enjoyed it!

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 5/16/2019 1:02:00 PM

Thank you very much, Michelle. Your enjoyment is worth a lot. I'm glad to see you here)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/16/2019 4:23:00 AM

O, you Card, you!! Clever as ever, Kurt. G.L. in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 5/16/2019 5:10:00 AM

Thank you, Wolf. You're nice)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/15/2019 5:11:00 PM

Excellent Kurt! I am not sure if I can write one of any merit. : )

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 5/16/2019 5:10:00 AM

Thank you very much, Connie. I'm sure you can write everything and much better than me)