Kurt Ravidas Poet Verse

A Busy Life Four Walls

a busy life. four walls 
lay out impressions of the day
like solitaire: the king of ham
and eggs, the queen’s late call
and the ace of insomnia


05/15/2019
Writing Challenge 2, May 2019, Lind68868 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Dear Heart 
Theme: 1. a living scene
Syllables Per Line:	6 8 8 6 8

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Michelle Faulkner May 16, 2019 at 11:12 AM 'The ace of insomnia' - so descriptive, I imagine this will do well in the contest, enjoyed it! Kurt Ravidas May 16, 2019 at 1:02 PM Thank you very much, Michelle. Your enjoyment is worth a lot. I'm glad to see you here)

Gershon Wolf May 16, 2019 at 4:23 AM O, you Card, you!! Clever as ever, Kurt. G.L. in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon Kurt Ravidas May 16, 2019 at 5:10 AM Thank you, Wolf. You're nice)

Connie Marcum Wong May 15, 2019 at 5:11 PM Excellent Kurt! I am not sure if I can write one of any merit. : ) Kurt Ravidas May 16, 2019 at 5:10 AM Thank you very much, Connie. I'm sure you can write everything and much better than me)