A Busy Fly

a busy fly
on his dense moustache...
post tea nap



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Placement:3rd; (Feb. 2012)

Contest:Juxtaposition haiku

Sponsor:Charles Henderson

By:Kash poet

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Carol Sunshine Brown

March 4, 2012 at 10:58 AM

Congratulations on your super win Kash. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 4, 2012 at 10:47 AM

congrats Kash on a grand HM for this bright write luv..

Kim Merryman

February 25, 2012 at 10:07 AM

Congrats on your win, Kash! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 24, 2012 at 5:31 AM

Congratulations on your win in Charles' Haiku contest Kash. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

February 23, 2012 at 11:16 PM

how you turned this around amazes me, kashi buddy... a first prize for me... sweet congrats on your big win and thanks for your keen haiku mind!..:) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

February 23, 2012 at 8:51 PM

and hey, you never sent that email!!!

Andrea Dietrich

February 23, 2012 at 8:50 PM

Congratulations . one of my personal favorites in the whole contest.

Gwendolen Song

February 23, 2012 at 7:05 PM

A cartoonesque image, Kashi! Fun and interesting spin! Anyone in these top spots is a superb haiku-ist! Gwendolen

Debbie Guzzi

February 23, 2012 at 5:45 PM

every time I read this.. it makes me want to find this man and kiss him! I do so love moustaches! & tea [of course the fly would have to go!] Congrad's on your win!

Charles Henderson

February 23, 2012 at 5:27 PM

Kash, you just keep rolling these things out and make it look so easy. We both know better don't we.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

February 21, 2012 at 12:02 PM

Ok I am being dense here-- so you mean to tell me the fly is on a man's mustache?? Heehee, Good thing I wasn't there, I might have swatted that fly! :) This is a nice image...and thanks for passing by my poem--hehe as for my name, just felt like being Pen Nee, I am silly just for a couple of days...it was that or Enn Pee...lol. :p

Charmaine Chircop

February 20, 2012 at 3:03 AM

:) I love your haiku Kash,One of my favourite haiku writers indeed,am smilin :)

Nette Onclaud

February 20, 2012 at 12:48 AM

yoohoo, anything new, kashi?? ) hugggs!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

February 19, 2012 at 10:02 PM

What a picture...very funny. I enjoyed this tonight. Rhonda :)

Andrea Dietrich

February 19, 2012 at 6:48 PM

hahaha, YEs, a great contrast, nap vs. busy fly. VERY nice, Kash. I have one to post later!! Luv, Andrea

Gautami Phookan

February 19, 2012 at 2:02 PM

Amazing, I'd say.. it leaves you thinking... thanks for your kind remarks, one feels so welcomed. Hope shall be able to stay longer. best wishes always...

Gautami Phookan

February 19, 2012 at 9:04 PM

Kash, I had to withdraw that poem from the contest, since I missed the A/B/C part... had read only the 2nd part of nette's instructions and now it's too late.. so I thought why not remove that one repeating line. will it look better with it, I'll insert it again...thanks!!