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A Busy Fly

a busy fly
on his dense moustache...
post tea nap



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Placement:3rd; (Feb. 2012)

Contest:Juxtaposition haiku

Sponsor:Charles Henderson

By:Kash poet

Copyright © Kash Poet | Year Posted 2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/4/2012 10:58:00 AM Congratulations on your super win Kash. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/4/2012 10:47:00 AM congrats Kash on a grand HM for this bright write luv.. Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 2/25/2012 10:07:00 AM Congrats on your win, Kash! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/24/2012 5:31:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Charles' Haiku contest Kash. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 2/23/2012 11:16:00 PM how you turned this around amazes me, kashi buddy... a first prize for me... sweet congrats on your big win and thanks for your keen haiku mind!..:) huggs! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/23/2012 8:51:00 PM and hey, you never sent that email!!! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/23/2012 8:50:00 PM Congratulations . one of my personal favorites in the whole contest. Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 2/23/2012 7:05:00 PM A cartoonesque image, Kashi! Fun and interesting spin! Anyone in these top spots is a superb haiku-ist! Gwendolen Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/23/2012 5:45:00 PM every time I read this.. it makes me want to find this man and kiss him! I do so love moustaches! & tea [of course the fly would have to go!] Congrad's on your win! Login to Reply

Charles Henderson Date: 2/23/2012 5:27:00 PM Kash, you just keep rolling these things out and make it look so easy. We both know better don't we. Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 2/21/2012 12:02:00 PM Ok I am being dense here-- so you mean to tell me the fly is on a man's mustache?? Heehee, Good thing I wasn't there, I might have swatted that fly! :) This is a nice image...and thanks for passing by my poem--hehe as for my name, just felt like being Pen Nee, I am silly just for a couple of days...it was that or Enn Pee...lol. :p Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 2/20/2012 3:03:00 AM :) I love your haiku Kash,One of my favourite haiku writers indeed,am smilin :) Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 2/20/2012 12:48:00 AM yoohoo, anything new, kashi?? ) hugggs! Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 2/19/2012 10:02:00 PM What a picture...very funny. I enjoyed this tonight. Rhonda :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/19/2012 6:48:00 PM hahaha, YEs, a great contrast, nap vs. busy fly. VERY nice, Kash. I have one to post later!! Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Gautami Phookan Date: 2/19/2012 2:02:00 PM Amazing, I'd say.. it leaves you thinking... thanks for your kind remarks, one feels so welcomed. Hope shall be able to stay longer. best wishes always... Login to Reply Gautami Phookan Date: 2/19/2012 9:04:00 PM Kash, I had to withdraw that poem from the contest, since I missed the A/B/C part... had read only the 2nd part of nette's instructions and now it's too late.. so I thought why not remove that one repeating line. will it look better with it, I'll insert it again...thanks!!

Nette Onclaud Date: 2/19/2012 1:44:00 PM love the images with sharp ending, kashi buddy... try to look into mine..:) huggs!:) Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 2/19/2012 1:36:00 PM A busy one indeed Kash ;) I am off to la la land, thank you for your comments they are always appreciated ;) Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 2/19/2012 12:36:00 PM Kash another top haiku..David Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 2/19/2012 12:24:00 PM A very funny picture you present. Good one, Kash. Love, KIm Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/19/2012 12:09:00 PM very funny did you see this happening or did you just think it up very cool beans ~always p.d. Login to Reply

Deck Fitzgerald Date: 2/19/2012 10:31:00 AM Nice Haiku Kash , Declan ... Login to Reply