A Buson Inspired Haiku
Here goes. Trying to work toward my Learner’s Permit. :) hugs to All
Haiku of this morninG
Inspiration by Yosa Buson: 1716-1783
Coolness —
the sound of the bell
as it leaves the bell.
My response, (c) s.young Eslinger 2021
Shocking!
the sound of the bell’s being
thus struck shivers.
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