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A Buson Inspired Haiku

Here goes.  Trying to work toward my Learner’s Permit. :)  hugs to All

Haiku of this morninG

Inspiration  by Yosa Buson: 1716-1783

Coolness —
the sound of the bell
as it leaves the bell.



My response, (c) s.young Eslinger 2021

Shocking!
the sound of the bell’s being
thus struck shivers.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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