Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Tanka

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A Burgundy Sign

Fruits of a long day
black cherries in sundown skies
Then deep purple night
We've long loved the sun
but now greet dusky shadows 

The platinum moon
sends rich luster from afar
in the wild rose phase
The birds have not sung lately
It's just a sign of the time

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Victor Buhagiar October 19, 2022 at 11:07 PM You manage a poem of birds and fruit. So lovely though knowing winter is near. Beautiful verse as usual. Evelyn Judy Buehler October 20, 2022 at 10:10 AM Your positive remarks are a delight. :)

Michael Tor October 19, 2022 at 7:24 PM Just lovely Evelyn love to see and read. Evelyn Judy Buehler October 19, 2022 at 7:33 PM I appreciate your comments very much.

Sotto Poet October 19, 2022 at 6:17 PM This is such a beautiful rhyme, Evelyn; it's bursting with vivid imagery, and the wording is smooth and easy to follow. Blessings Evelyn Judy Buehler October 19, 2022 at 7:29 PM Thank you so much for your kind expressions, Lasaad. Have a nice evening, Evelyn

Chris Conn October 19, 2022 at 5:51 PM In a perfect world I'd be you editor, stylist and cinematographer ... Chris Conn October 21, 2022 at 12:13 AM Unfortunately I've been swindled (out) of my perfect world. Evelyn Judy Buehler October 19, 2022 at 7:25 PM (Giggle!) How I would like that! Thank you for your thoughts. :D