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A Bully Tale

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A Bully Tale


Pay me 
   Says he

I'm broke
  No joke!

One look
  Shoes took

Can’t run
    He won!

10/25/16

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Sara Kendrick

November 5, 2016 at 9:39 AM

Footles so fine upon the winners’ list is awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

October 30, 2016 at 5:20 PM

ahhh, too bad you missed one footle. This was dang good. Congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 30, 2016 at 1:53 PM

- ........ and you won :) - Congrats on your great second place in the contest, Betty - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

October 30, 2016 at 1:47 PM

Great string of footles Betty unfortunately you were one stanza short. many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Betty Janko

October 30, 2016 at 5:54 PM

I do wish I looked more carefully when I edited it. The first one had 5 stanzas but it was not funny enough, so I re-did it and accidentally dropped one. My bad, it was supposed to have one "mis-spoke,tooth broke" but it disappeared! OOPS! Betty

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