Notes About The Poem

A Bud So Sweet

bud opens mouth wide

      a hovering hummingbird...

                        pauses for nectar



Hi-Ku(7) place promise Poetry Contest (Winner: 3rd Place)
Sponsored by: Brian Strand 
Date written: 01/13/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Watt Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 11:43 PM
I sure enjoy watching hummingbirds harvest their nectar. Delightful lines, Edward - congrats on your win
Ibeh Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 5:39 AM
Thank you so much, John:-)
Andresen Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 11:23 AM
- Really beautiful, Edward :) - (I would have had this at the top of the winner list) :) - Congratulations on your win :) - Happy weekend and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 11:54 AM
Thank you very much indeed, Anne-Lise:-)
La France Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 10:40 AM
Edward, I love you haiku and your image is sublime, well done _Constance
Ibeh Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 11:34 AM
Thank you very much, Constance:-)
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