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A Brook, a Stream, a River

a brook, a stream, a river see the current flow three timeless places where man's reflections grow... watch a leaf get swept along hear a robin sing his song make a wish and let it go ~ to the current it belongs Entry in 'A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest' September 25, 2022

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Date: 10/3/2022 9:38:00 AM
What a happy, peaceful place you have led us to Gershon filled with gurgling water, bird songs and leaves floating on the water. In our chaotic world, all of need to find such a place. Thank you for showing us the way. Blessings to you especially at this holy time of year for you.
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Date: 9/30/2022 4:10:00 AM
it sounds like the recipe for a happy heart Gershon, congrats,
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Date: 10/1/2022 8:36:00 PM
Thank you, Mystic. You are right. Here's to Happiness in the Heart and Everywhere! :) gw
Date: 9/29/2022 10:40:00 PM
"to the current it belongs" - Beautiful poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/1/2022 8:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, Alex. Here's to your weekend! :) gw
Date: 9/29/2022 11:02:00 AM
This is going to my FAVE list. I love everything about it.
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Date: 9/29/2022 5:26:00 PM
Thank you so much for the FAVE, Caren. Greatly appreciated, Gershon
Date: 9/28/2022 3:40:00 PM
Congratulations, Gershon! Very well done!
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Date: 9/28/2022 5:26:00 PM
Appreciate you noticing, Kim! :) gw
Date: 9/28/2022 3:31:00 PM
It appears dear Gershon that wishes would have their own ebb and flow like the water, love this. Thanks for sharing your congratulatory poem, :)
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Date: 9/28/2022 5:21:00 PM
Thank you for noticing this poem, Mystic. Dreams of Streams, Gershon
Date: 9/27/2022 7:35:00 AM
Sweet streams gw. alf
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Date: 9/27/2022 7:05:00 PM
Thank you, chuckle. Sweet streams to you, Linda! :) gw
Date: 9/26/2022 4:16:00 PM
This is beautiful Gershon, I love this!
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Date: 9/27/2022 7:12:00 PM
Thank you so much, BJ. Happiness and Light, Gershon
Date: 9/26/2022 3:42:00 AM
GW, as though your leaf were my thought, I am carried away with the lovely image created by your poem! Happy Monday!!!
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Date: 9/27/2022 7:15:00 PM
Thanks for such a poetic comment, Mike! Streaming and Beaming, Gershon
Date: 9/25/2022 10:15:00 PM
loved this :)
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Date: 9/27/2022 7:18:00 PM
Susan, much appreciated. Happiness and Joy, Gershon
Date: 9/25/2022 8:30:00 PM
This is a most enjoyable read, gw. Everything has its place in the scheme of things. Yes, where "it belongs."
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Date: 9/27/2022 7:20:00 PM
Appreciate the appreciation, Milt. Take good care, Gershon
Date: 9/25/2022 5:14:00 PM
Well written Gershon...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/27/2022 7:24:00 PM
Thank you, Michael. Hope all is well. :) gw
Date: 9/25/2022 4:54:00 PM
I liked it! Here's a companion: a sea, a tide, a wave crashes on the beach a boy, a lad, a knave overpowers each. drawn out by the tide taken for a raucous ride feet at last back on the sand ~ appreciation for dry land
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Date: 9/27/2022 7:26:00 PM
Always coming back to that dry land. ~ Landlubber

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