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A Broken Promise

Out of my dream, you came as a vision blinding my sight. You looked so graceful and pleasing to my heart’s delight. Your presence was calming to my mood whenever you were around. Your voice was soothing, like a gentle evening breeze with hardly any sound. Our love was simple and easygoing, In every corner of our hearts, contentment and happiness were overflowing, Ours was a tale of true love, profound and divine, We used to share this tale because it was ours, yes, yours and mine. In each other's embrace, we were spellbound, In the depths of our Souls, our love was entwined and bound. Through life's hardships, our love stood firm and always remained intact, And with mutual understanding and patience, we knew how to react. In gentle whispers, sweet words were spoken, A promise made, now broken, It seems that none of those things had any value cause now, you say they didn't matter, I believed and trusted in your endless chatter , and now my heart is completely shattered. Time shows no mercy to lovers For in a single moment, It shatters two hearts and ruins two lives. by Zyrool

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Date: 6/30/2024 2:03:00 PM
The deeper we fall the harder the break, this is really a sad ending dear Zyrool, sometimes one person feels more then the other, when that happens its bound to end. :(
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 7/5/2024 2:59:00 AM
Thank you Rose for your kind words, much appreciated. Making peace and moving on,it was an amicable parting. Have a wonderful weekend, my friend.
Date: 6/25/2024 11:03:00 AM
This is a very fine poem of broken romance. Who said, "Is it to be better to have loved an lost, then to never have loved at all?". This poem reminds me of that saying.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 6/25/2024 2:32:00 PM
Hi Hilda thank you for the read, much appreciated . I agree with that saying. No regrets taking the chance. Have a fabulous day my friend.
Date: 6/24/2024 3:56:00 PM
Hello Zyrool , a promise broken to the other person hurts. It takes time to heal. Then it takes time to trust. It will take time to trust. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/25/2024 3:16:00 PM
Hello Zyrool, Gifford,, It rained here today. Did it rain where you live? Yes my friend trust is like an egg once it is broken itt c an not be fixed. Time does heal a broken heart. Thank you my friend. i will You also have a beautiful week. /Darlene/Hugs.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 6/25/2024 2:36:00 PM
Hi Darlene, thank you for checking out my work, trust is like an egg once broken it can’t be fixed. Time heals and the heart will adjust. Wishing for a beautiful rest of the week, my friend.

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