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A Broken Keepsake

ebony chalk sketched her soft silhouette, old keepsakes reveal heartache- a broken easel mourns... Form K-Kimo Sponsor, Broken Wings April 2, 2017

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2017 11:59:00 AM

One of the very best winning entries that I have read , Laura! Very effective! Congratulations. Regards // paul

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/7/2017 10:46:00 AM

Love this one Laura...

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 4/7/2017 9:36:00 AM

Its lovely Laura!

Joseph May

Date: 4/7/2017 8:58:00 AM

Congrats on a great win Laura

Constance La France

Date: 4/7/2017 8:29:00 AM

Laura congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful Kimo. I love it.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 4/7/2017 5:42:00 AM

Good one Laura: You have painted a perfect image. Hugs, SuZ

John Michaels

Date: 4/7/2017 2:11:00 AM

I really like this. Well done on your high placement!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/6/2017 9:52:00 PM

this one was one of my favorites. Congrats on your win, Laura.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 4/6/2017 8:54:00 PM

So touchy. Congrats to win top.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2017 6:29:00 PM

This is excellent Kimo writing, Laura loo

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/4/2017 2:25:00 PM

Fabulous haunting image, luloo. Good luck in the contest.