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A Broken Heart

A broken heart cannot be mended
   Neither can romance, once ended
Send me not your reparations
   Your maudlin, miserable placations

You played me for a fool, you did
   Let me down so cruel, you did
Then you sent me gifts and notes
       Perchance you gloat at
       the catch in my throat  

You ran off with a shiny doll
   Who tells you now that you're her all
When she finds out what she's seized
       She'll dump you just like
               you did me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/28/2018 5:11:00 AM
Sweet how you twisted it from something that seemed a bit dour and sad to an upbeat, positive ending. What goes around....
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/28/2018 1:49:00 PM
Interesting comment... I myself wasn't so positive that it was positive. Positively yours, Gershon
Date: 8/27/2018 8:10:00 PM
Dunno why, but this made me think of bubblegum- snap. Love it. xomo
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/28/2018 7:52:00 AM
Tee hee, reciting this in my mind chewing the first stanza, blowing up the second, and popping the third ;) in a teenage attitude kind of way. I love it even more today.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2018 10:23:00 PM
Maureen made me laugh! Too funny!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/27/2018 8:43:00 PM
Dunno why, either. "Many are the thoughts in the heart of (wo)man!!" --King David, the Psalmist, a looooooong time ago. ~ gw
Date: 8/27/2018 2:12:00 PM
Wow! Big emotion!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/27/2018 4:39:00 PM
Thank you for viewing this one and for your support, Kim! ~ Gershon

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