A Broken Dream


Through the gates of a mysterious garden,
Eyes glinting in the moon,
A sudden wind caught my hair,
Dark chambers, a choking sound in the shadows,
Unlatching the threads of a defiled soul.

Feet cold on the grass,
And I stood listening.
The darkling seas beyond moan,
Unearthing the sepultures,
Secretly buried in their womb.

Torn petals upon my palms lay,
Engravings shrunken and old,
Of some forgotten verse.
The boughs were dancing there,
The night sky, their flowers mirrored shimmering,
Echoing their song of some broken dream.
 
((... I walked away from the ancient ruins,, a glimpse at those hidden hollows,, slipping into the silence.))
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Olanrewaju Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 2:28 PM
This is truely a piece i cant resist, I love this!!!
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 8:28 AM
I can visualize...Gautami.
Phookan Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 8:51 AM
Thank you Rajat, you've been here in the past too reading and leaving your kind words and appreciating my work, when I've hardly reciprocated. I cannot thank you enough..
Fox Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 3:40 PM
A lovely piece !
Phookan Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 8:52 AM
Thank you Nigel Fox!
Allison Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 2:10 PM
such deep sad imagery Gataumi:-( Hugs jan x
Allison Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 10:43 AM
i am so sorry you are seeing some of my recent sad writes Guatami - I write from the heart - I do try and write with humour when I can:-) You have no need to explain Guatami - the lines of a song spring to mind - 'you say it best... why you say nothing at all' Hugs Jan xx
Phookan Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 8:48 AM
Thank you Jan, there are times when... well, can't say. But ok, I need to pay a visit to your poems too, and be here with you guys more...
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