"a Brisk Walk"

The driving rain falls

                        like bristles of a old comb,

                                                         till chills consume me...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A   Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 9:01 PM
ha ..love this image... i wish i was there... xox~pd
Neels Avatar
September 11, 2010 at 5:30 AM
Why are you playing in the rain? Hehe just kidding, I love your metaphors Michael, hope your Saturday will be an awesome one, love Wilma
Kendrick Avatar
September 11, 2010 at 3:39 AM
So descriptive is the write that you have penned ...I can just see and feel this rain..So glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..You blessed my day..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 11:18 PM
VEry intense, just like pounding rain that you describe here. Awesome, Michael!
Locksley Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 4:24 PM
Great comparison -- rain "like bristles of an old comb." Enjoyed your haiku, Michael.
A   Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 3:45 PM
nice one, enjoyed your write, wish you the best of your day ahead..P.D.
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