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A Brilliant Light

A brilliant light I see while leaving earth's grey mist. Approaching it, I see inside of its white glow - the precious smiling souls of those I've loved and missed. Sweet clarity! All things I'd wondered - now I know! For Carolyn Devonshire's Perceptions of Heaven Poetry Contest

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John Watt

Date: 4/15/2020 11:16:00 PM

Andrea, nice to see this one in the winner's circle with its beautiful message and nicely cadenced iambic hexameter, which I think is kind of rare for you. But you know, meter and syllable count is not the same thing *wink* ;^)

John Watt
Date: 4/15/2020 11:17:00 PM

I meant the iambic hexameter is kind of rare for you, not the nicely cadenced part. That is a given for your poetry!

Kash Poet

Date: 10/3/2013 2:49:00 PM

John Watt
Date: 4/15/2020 11:12:00 PM

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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/3/2013 3:07:00 PM

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/31/2012 8:58:00 AM

Congrats on this win and welcome back. love phyl

Jack Horne

Date: 3/28/2012 1:31:00 PM

What a beautiful piece!

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/27/2012 2:32:00 PM

Oh.. i see you've had a win then..! that was a quick result ; L O L..) hope you had a good break...!

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/27/2012 2:29:00 PM

A really unique write here Andrea,, hoping you score high in Carolyns contest..)

Daver Austin

Date: 3/27/2012 9:52:00 AM

A winner! Carolyn, of course, would love this one. It is sooooooo SPOOKY. I'm not putting Carolyn down. I myself am quite spooky. Congrats on the win. Love, daver

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/27/2012 5:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Carolyn's contest Andrea. Love, Carol

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 3/27/2012 4:27:00 AM

certainly it has just what it takes to be a nice heaven, jag

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/27/2012 4:02:00 AM

I think of all the things that excite me about heaven, complete understanding is one of the biggest treats!...wonderful tho't process here, Andrea!

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/26/2012 9:46:00 PM

A beauty, love the ending especially Andrea ;) Congratulations on your win! love Wilma

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/26/2012 9:01:00 PM

Andrea, glad you are back... hope to see you visit me soon..lol here on.the soup that is...I love the take on your little perception towards heaven. Good luck in the contest enjoyed, have yourself a wonderful day~luv*PD :-)

M.I.A .

Date: 3/26/2012 8:37:00 PM

congrats congrats on your win Andrea! a deserving one with this beyond perception write

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/26/2012 7:45:00 PM

congrats Andrea on a dynamidc win for this lovely depiction of the great beyond.. missing u so much.. hope your party went well and Mom was surprised and happy.. safe trip home luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/26/2012 5:29:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/26/2012 4:39:00 PM

Yes! This is a definite vision I would have upon arriving into heaven! I love this sight you have bestowed before us Andrea! I really enjoyed this poem that I have read this early evening! I love your write immensely my friend! Excellent Work!!

Russell Sivey
Date: 3/26/2012 4:42:00 PM

Congrats on your win!

Robert Johnson

Date: 3/26/2012 4:33:00 PM

Healing words for earthly hearts. We're filled with soulful joy. They give us hope when our soul departs. No more can evil spirits annoy.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/26/2012 4:32:00 PM

this is wonderful, especially the last line. good luck in the contest!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/26/2012 3:45:00 PM

Congrad's on your winning write! Light & Love

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/26/2012 3:17:00 PM

nice and fresh, and a very positive poem, congrats, harry

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/26/2012 3:13:00 PM

Congrats Andrea on your win. Reuniting with loved ones must be the best part of crossing over into the next realm and I don't doubt it for a minute. Wonderful poem!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/26/2012 3:08:00 PM

congrats on your contest win andrea, a sweet vision of what may lie beyond...hope you had a nice time at your family reunion! :-)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/26/2012 3:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Andrea. Glad you had such a nice weekend. Love, Joyce

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/26/2012 1:58:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Andrea. Great write. Nice going. luvand huggs, Ralphie

Gautami Phookan

Date: 3/26/2012 1:11:00 PM

We all wonder what heaven must be like, must be very close to your perception, Andrea, loving to read these poems for Carolyn's contest.. and I can see you are back, welcome dear... love you

Gautami Phookan
Date: 3/26/2012 1:15:00 PM

... Congratulations, this has won!!