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A Brighter Tomorrow

The Western world will breathe easier when Kim Jong Un starts the denuclearization of North Korea. And the Russian dictator Vladimir Putin gives Ukraine back its lost peninsula of Crimea. There will be celebrations worldwide when Israel and Palestine stop the hate and settle their dispute. And the constant threat of war is no longer looming, for both nations' right to exist is deemed absolute. The world will breathe easier when Bashar al-Assad ends his civil war and finally leaves Syria. And the militant Islamist group Boko Haram stops raping girls and is driven from Nigeria. Democracy will win when President Donald Trump is exposed and reduced to a political quirk. And global warming's threat is taken seriously, so the fate of our planet is not left to guesswork. (Quatrain) June13, 2018

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Razaan Killawi

Date: 1/8/2019 7:53:00 AM

This upsets me because many people make the Palestinian-Israeli conflict seem as a childish dispute that if settled will end hate. This conflict is so much more than that, a matter of people(Israelis) claiming that country is their's when it is not, taking the culture and identity of Palestinians, diminishing it and then claiming it as their own. I hope I have helped you understand the conflict a little more and that your poetry only grows and becomes more beautiful and motivating. :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/8/2019 9:19:00 AM

Thanks Razaan, as I said your opinion is duly noted, however it is still a dispute no one said it was childish, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Razaan Killawi

Date: 1/8/2019 7:45:00 AM

Hi Emile, beautiful poem :) however I disagree with you about "There will be celebrations world wide when Israel and Palestine stop the hate and settle their dispute." It is not a matter of a 'settling a dispute' but rather a matter of justice. The people of Palestine were kind enough to open their doors for Jews after WW2, and they never know that it would become a matter of people claiming that the country belonged to them.

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/8/2019 9:20:00 AM

Thanks Razaan, your opinion is duly noted, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Roy Pett

Date: 7/4/2018 8:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Emile, I totally agree with all the sentiments within your well written poem. :))

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/4/2018 8:34:00 AM

Thanks Roy, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/3/2018 8:15:00 PM

Congrats on your win. I agree with all except your last stanza. All the others are logical and possible. Nevertheless, a well-written poem. :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/4/2018 7:40:00 AM

Thanks Susan, I appreciate it, I take it you're a Trump supporter my friend, Emile.

Charles Messina

Date: 7/3/2018 5:35:00 AM

Emile, I really love this one! Congratulations on your win in my contest. Thank you for entering and being a part of this. Bod Bless...Charlie

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/3/2018 8:43:00 AM

Thank you Charles, I appreciate my placement in your contest my friend, you honor me, Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/3/2018 12:59:00 AM

You have touched on the answers to many solvable problems Emile. The majority on this earth want peace. An insightful piece that deserves its high placement. Congratulations my friend! : )

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/3/2018 8:47:00 AM

Thanks Connie, as always I appreciate your support my friend, I hope you are doing well, Emile.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/2/2018 10:48:00 PM

Congratulations on your win for this visionary, diplomatic write, Emile. Best wishes, Gershon

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/3/2018 8:46:00 AM

Thanks Gershon, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Curtis Moorman

Date: 7/2/2018 10:36:00 PM

Those reflections are a wonderful expression of the compassion that rests in you, Emile. Thank you for sharing it with us on Soup, and congratulations on your placement.

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/3/2018 8:45:00 AM

Thanks Curtis, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/13/2018 10:01:00 AM

Wonderful political statement and feeling shared, Emile. Well done.

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/13/2018 11:44:00 AM

Thanks Line, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.