A Brighter Tomorrow

The Western world will breathe easier when Kim Jong Un starts the denuclearization of North Korea. And the Russian dictator Vladimir Putin gives Ukraine back its lost peninsula of Crimea. There will be celebrations worldwide when Israel and Palestine stop the hate and settle their dispute. And the constant threat of war is no longer looming, for both nations' right to exist is deemed absolute. The world will breathe easier when Bashar al-Assad ends his civil war and finally leaves Syria. And the militant Islamist group Boko Haram stops raping girls and is driven from Nigeria. Democracy will win when President Donald Trump is exposed and reduced to a political quirk. And global warming's threat is taken seriously, so the fate of our planet is not left to guesswork. (Quatrain) June13, 2018
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Killawi Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 7:53 AM
This upsets me because many people make the Palestinian-Israeli conflict seem as a childish dispute that if settled will end hate. This conflict is so much more than that, a matter of people(Israelis) claiming that country is their's when it is not, taking the culture and identity of Palestinians, diminishing it and then claiming it as their own. I hope I have helped you understand the conflict a little more and that your poetry only grows and becomes more beautiful and motivating. :)
Pinet Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 9:19 AM
Thanks Razaan, as I said your opinion is duly noted, however it is still a dispute no one said it was childish, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Killawi Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 7:45 AM
Hi Emile, beautiful poem :) however I disagree with you about "There will be celebrations world wide when Israel and Palestine stop the hate and settle their dispute." It is not a matter of a 'settling a dispute' but rather a matter of justice. The people of Palestine were kind enough to open their doors for Jews after WW2, and they never know that it would become a matter of people claiming that the country belonged to them.
Pinet Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 9:20 AM
Thanks Razaan, your opinion is duly noted, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Pett Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 8:26 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Emile, I totally agree with all the sentiments within your well written poem. :))
Pinet Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 8:34 AM
Thanks Roy, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Gentry Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 8:15 PM
Congrats on your win. I agree with all except your last stanza. All the others are logical and possible. Nevertheless, a well-written poem. :)
Pinet Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 7:40 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate it, I take it you're a Trump supporter my friend, Emile.
Messina Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 5:35 AM
Emile, I really love this one! Congratulations on your win in my contest. Thank you for entering and being a part of this. Bod Bless...Charlie
Pinet Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 8:43 AM
Thank you Charles, I appreciate my placement in your contest my friend, you honor me, Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 12:59 AM
You have touched on the answers to many solvable problems Emile. The majority on this earth want peace. An insightful piece that deserves its high placement. Congratulations my friend! : )
Pinet Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 8:47 AM
Thanks Connie, as always I appreciate your support my friend, I hope you are doing well, Emile.
Wolf Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 10:48 PM
Congratulations on your win for this visionary, diplomatic write, Emile. Best wishes, Gershon
Pinet Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 8:46 AM
Thanks Gershon, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Moorman Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 10:36 PM
Those reflections are a wonderful expression of the compassion that rests in you, Emile. Thank you for sharing it with us on Soup, and congratulations on your placement.
Pinet Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 8:45 AM
Thanks Curtis, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 10:01 AM
Wonderful political statement and feeling shared, Emile. Well done.
Pinet Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 11:44 AM
Thanks Line, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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