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A Bridge To Somewhere

Anchored in the solid granite cliffs On either side of the tree-lined gorge, Above the C&O tracks and rickety shacks Of farmers and miners and naked children Playing in the dirt ‘neath the front porch, Who stop to watch the coal train passing Underneath the arching silver steel girders Wondering wide-eyed how they built that bridge! -- Way up yonder like a humongous gray rainbow With its promise of faraway places, And pots of gold someday in recurring dreams, Knowing it’s not likely they will escape Just like none of their older kinfolk did Even though they believed that bridge Was the road to places somewhere, anywhere Away from deep and narrow seams of coal, And raw memories of their poverty-stained childhood.
FIRST PLACE WINNER a Brian Strand Contest Poetry Soup, January 14, 2022

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Date: 1/14/2022 3:15:00 PM
Milton, Excellent descriptive writing. I enjoyed reading your poem. Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/14/2022 4:10:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim, for your thoughtful comment.
Date: 10/28/2021 9:28:00 PM
A fave for me
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/29/2021 9:52:00 AM
Wow, thanks so much, Caren. I liked this one myself.
Date: 10/26/2021 7:16:00 AM
It is a part of the "it's not what we do, it's who we are" syndrome based in a fierce pride in doing what others consider crazy. Excellently written, sharp and gentle all at once....
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/26/2021 9:09:00 AM
Thanks, John. I grew up in coal country, and my dad was a coal miner. So, I'm pretty intimately acquainted with it.
Date: 10/25/2021 8:45:00 PM
Yeah, it's depressing isn't it? Kind of like the old European caste system: My grandpa was a miner. My father is a miner. I shall be a miner. And my son will be a miner. 'Course you and your son may have to move to China, if Biden and team get their way -- though something tells me coal will be around a lot longer than the pundits think... :) gw
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/25/2021 8:59:00 PM
I suspect it will be...but, then, what do I know? West Virginians and East Kentuckians are pretty dependent and plugged into coal mining. Many of them know nothing else.
Date: 10/25/2021 6:23:00 PM
Life is like a lottery. Too little for some, too much for others. Thank godness for dreams. Another of your thought provoking poems. Thank you, Milt ...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/25/2021 7:33:00 PM
That is so true, Shirley. Thanks for your kind comment.
Date: 10/25/2021 4:59:00 PM
Oh WoW! Been there and done that. When I was a kid we used to watch the trains and wave at the engineers. Never gave a thought to where they were going but we all thought the engineers were rich men with their fine jobs on the train. Good stuff. God Bless, JB
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/25/2021 7:33:00 PM
Thanks, JB. Things are so different now. When I was a kid I used to dream of riding a train somewhere...anywhere. It was so exotic!

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