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A Bridge Over Silent Waters Never judge your fellow man Before seeking your own reflection Not the one that shines in a glass mirror Seek it in the eyes of your fellow man His eyes shall reflect your compassion or lack there of When a pond has no ripples Look for the lies, underneath When you see the waves upon the water Know that the winds are singing to you Truth will always seek you out Never close your heart to a strangers smile His smile may bring you serenity or deception Trust in your inner being to know It shall open up towards the rainbows or seek refuge To protect your soul When you see a human suffering Flea not inside your reflection Instead reflect upon his suffering Share the waters of your pond with him This shall promise you both more rainfall Notes This was inspired by a poem written by Charmaine, she was kind enough to let me use a few of her lines in the first verse of this poem. Its amazing how when you read something it can open your mind to think of things you otherwise would not have. For some reason, maybe more because of his messages than his style I find myself thinking of Richards’s poetry as well. This for me is the beauty of the site, the inspiration one gets from fellow poets, it’s a great honor to have met so many, and to have shared so many ideas and views and opinions. More important than any poem is the laughter and smiles, this among friends is like giving away gold bars. (Although I do accept the occasional gold bar now and then)

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Date: 1/8/2016 4:41:00 PM
HI Arthur, I just saw this on Facebook will pass it on to Edwin Hofert and Veebdosa such a lovely write!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/9/2016 9:45:00 PM
Thank you Judy, Charmaine sure is an inspiration, and I must add, your poem "My Abiding Memory" really resonated with me, when I read that, as well I said, the apple doesn't fall far from tree. :) http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/my_abiding_memory_742315
Date: 12/29/2015 7:13:00 AM
A wonderful new find for me this morn my friend. This fine poem and it having been selected as POTW. GREAT THAT YOU INCLUDED THE NOTE!!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/9/2016 9:41:00 PM
Been playing catch up here! Thank you!
Date: 12/17/2015 12:33:00 PM
This is more than a gold bar, this is truth. I love your POTW.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/19/2015 12:53:00 AM
Very kind of you thanks!
Date: 12/15/2015 4:05:00 PM
Congratulations on this outstanding poem being selected POTW!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/19/2015 12:52:00 AM
Thank you Connie! Hope you have a very Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/14/2015 5:31:00 PM
Have I grats you on poem of the week yet? or even said I dig your write? Well here it goes, happy poem of the week babe, I dig your write. :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/19/2015 12:49:00 AM
Thank you, lets hook up and find some graves!!!!
Date: 12/14/2015 3:56:00 PM
Oh poem of the week, Of course , Well deserved sweet friend.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/19/2015 12:34:00 AM
Thank you Charmaine!
Date: 12/14/2015 9:26:00 AM
The construct of the poem was okay, but the message is what trumped anything else. It was excellent. I do think though now a days people are afraid to speak up about anothers behavior for fear of reprisal; leading a recovery program I lost my best friend. Can't even make amends. Pride can be a killer. Judge not the person, but if one has taken the speck out of their eye, then take it out of the other. The poem was like Jesus talking. Congrats. Thomas
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/19/2015 12:32:00 AM
Thanks Thomas and you are 100% correct, I realized the poem itself was not maybe up to par, but the message was so therefore I went ahead with ahead it! Thank you for your kind words!
Date: 12/14/2015 7:00:00 AM
Hi Arthur: I admired your poem, especially the last stanza. "Share the waters of the pond with him". Great Write!
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/14/2015 7:02:00 AM
"Share the waters of pond with him". Great Write!
Date: 12/14/2015 3:44:00 AM
Hello Arthur, Congratulations on POTW!! Very Well-Done, Sir!! Merry Christmas, Gary
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/19/2015 12:31:00 AM
Thanks Gary, much appreciated!
Date: 12/13/2015 5:05:00 PM
Congrats on POTW! Way to go Arthur.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/14/2015 1:28:00 AM
Thanks Richard! Even I dont deserve all the credit here!!!
Date: 12/13/2015 2:30:00 PM
I'm itching to say congrats on poem of the weeeeekkkkkkkkk :-) hugs Jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/14/2015 1:26:00 AM
Thank you Jan, such flattery makes want to flea!
Date: 12/13/2015 1:20:00 PM
Arthur, I'm delighted to see this piece get selected as poem of the week. Congratulations! Enjoy the honor:-) Alexis
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/14/2015 1:27:00 AM
I will and the 2 million dollar prize too!!!!!
Date: 12/13/2015 9:09:00 AM
beautiful poem Arthur.. Shall I keep this as a fav?! :) Thank you...Congrats on being POTW ..God bless
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/14/2015 1:30:00 AM
You are so kind, and for sure Fav, unless you want an autographed original copy!!!!! LOL
Date: 12/12/2015 8:59:00 PM
Great springboard excellent landing. A Fav!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/14/2015 1:25:00 AM
Armand, as much as I am the Grinch, you are Santa Claus with such kindness!
Date: 12/12/2015 8:02:00 AM
If your going to distort your perceptions that's not a bad way to go.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/14/2015 1:24:00 AM
I love Canadian Logic!
Date: 12/11/2015 10:30:00 AM
A splendid piece my friend... deeply philosophical with superb phrasing and imagery. I am in total agreement with your sentiments. Best wishes, Keith
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/11/2015 9:23:00 PM
Thank you Keith! Very kind of you.
Date: 12/11/2015 10:05:00 AM
This is very beautiful and so well penned. A totally different and interesting approach to life as viewed through your poetic eyes and brought to life by your artistic skills. Emile.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/11/2015 9:22:00 PM
Thanks Emile, I had great inspiration from people here!
Date: 12/11/2015 5:18:00 AM
Excellent write Arthur, love the depth of emotion and inspiration. Hugs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/11/2015 9:20:00 PM
Thank you so much Cecilia! Hugs right back
Date: 12/10/2015 8:53:00 AM
Sometimes seeking our reflection through others eyes will distort our perception of ourselves. I enjoyed your inspiration, it caused me to think. I had a bit of inspiration myself and I took one of Freddie's poems and played around with his words. If you have a chance check it out.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/12/2015 2:27:00 AM
Will have a peek, after I distort my own perceptions with a bottle of Bordeaux!
Date: 12/10/2015 7:11:00 AM
Your lines inspire my soul to savo(u)r each moment with your poetry...These are my fave. Lines - 'When a pond have no rippes, look for the lies underneath', 'Truth will always seek you out' ,'Never close your heart to a stranger's smole ',and those last lines,Oh to share those waters of my pond,to br promised fresh clear rainfall,love love your masterpiece ..You and Richard are both poets who inspire so much wisdom..A fave : ). .in exchange for a canoe ... : )
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/12/2015 2:18:00 AM
He is for sure, the jury is still out on me! But I still have my canoe! LOL hugs
Date: 12/10/2015 2:36:00 AM
Lovely way to weave your thoughts around Charmaine's... So deep
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/12/2015 2:20:00 AM
Thanks Tim, sometimes its just comes, rarely , never the less!
Date: 12/10/2015 2:17:00 AM
You are a very wise man Arthur - for personal reasons I really relate to the 4th stanza :-( Oh boy I'm itching after reading about that pesky 'flea' lol:-) as I've said many times before you are a creative genius my friend - love the fact Charma's poem inspired you to write this gem:-) hugs Jan xx 7 faves
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/12/2015 5:14:00 AM
Oh I await with baited breath lol:-) hugs Jan xx Can't you get that flea to flee as this read makes me itch lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/12/2015 2:25:00 AM
Thank you, maybe after writing about fleas I shall tackle cows next! Just an idea!!!
Date: 12/10/2015 12:58:00 AM
enlightening insights from you, arthur... beautiful!..huggs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/11/2015 10:01:00 PM
Thank you nette! No idea how I could have come up with all that!
Date: 12/9/2015 11:53:00 PM
WoW! I enjoyed this piece and it's profound message. It's alot of wisdom in this write. Those last five lines were a WoW moment for me."When you see a human suffering. Flea not inside your reflection. Instead reflect upon his suffering .Share the waters of your pond with him. This shall promise you both more rainfall" This is what I call poetry in motion. This well written write can be life changing if you let it. Oustanding job ! :-) I'm a favin it and It's a big SEVEN:-)Alexis
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/11/2015 9:24:00 PM
well the idea "flooded" into my mind! LOL thank you so much!
Date: 12/9/2015 11:42:00 PM
Wowee! Wonderful!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/11/2015 9:23:00 PM
If you mean wonderful like you, then yes I concur!
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