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A Bridge Over Silent Waters

A Bridge Over Silent Waters

Never judge your fellow man
Before seeking your own reflection
Not the one that shines in a glass mirror
Seek it in the eyes of your fellow man
His eyes shall reflect your compassion or lack there of

When a pond has no ripples
Look for the lies, underneath
When you see the waves upon the water
Know that the winds are singing to you
Truth will always seek you out

Never close your heart to a strangers smile
His smile may bring you serenity or deception
Trust in your inner being to know
It shall open up towards the rainbows or seek refuge 
To protect your soul

When you see a human suffering
Flea not inside your reflection
Instead reflect upon his suffering
Share the waters of your pond with him
This shall promise you both more rainfall


Notes

This was inspired by a poem written by Charmaine, she was kind enough to let me use a few of her lines in the first verse of this poem. Its amazing how when you read something it can open your mind to think of things you otherwise would not have. For some reason, maybe more because of his messages than his style I find myself thinking of Richards’s poetry as well. This for me is the beauty of the site, the inspiration one gets from fellow poets, it’s a great honor to have met so many, and to have shared so many ideas and views and opinions. More important than any poem is the laughter and smiles, this among friends is like giving away gold bars. (Although I do accept the occasional gold bar now and then)
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Konos Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 4:41 PM
HI Arthur, I just saw this on Facebook will pass it on to Edwin Hofert and Veebdosa such a lovely write!
Vaso Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 9:45 PM
Thank you Judy, Charmaine sure is an inspiration, and I must add, your poem "My Abiding Memory" really resonated with me, when I read that, as well I said, the apple doesn't fall far from tree. :) http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/my_abiding_memory_742315
Lindley Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 7:13 AM
A wonderful new find for me this morn my friend. This fine poem and it having been selected as POTW. GREAT THAT YOU INCLUDED THE NOTE!!
Vaso Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 9:41 PM
Been playing catch up here! Thank you!
Williams Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 12:33 PM
This is more than a gold bar, this is truth. I love your POTW.
Vaso Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 12:53 AM
Very kind of you thanks!
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 4:05 PM
Congratulations on this outstanding poem being selected POTW!
Vaso Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 12:52 AM
Thank you Connie! Hope you have a very Merry Christmas!
Nance Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 5:31 PM
Have I grats you on poem of the week yet? or even said I dig your write? Well here it goes, happy poem of the week babe, I dig your write. :)
Vaso Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 12:49 AM
Thank you, lets hook up and find some graves!!!!
Chircop Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 3:56 PM
Oh poem of the week, Of course , Well deserved sweet friend.
Vaso Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 12:34 AM
Thank you Charmaine!
Carney Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 9:26 AM
The construct of the poem was okay, but the message is what trumped anything else. It was excellent. I do think though now a days people are afraid to speak up about anothers behavior for fear of reprisal; leading a recovery program I lost my best friend. Can't even make amends. Pride can be a killer. Judge not the person, but if one has taken the speck out of their eye, then take it out of the other. The poem was like Jesus talking. Congrats. Thomas
Vaso Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 12:32 AM
Thanks Thomas and you are 100% correct, I realized the poem itself was not maybe up to par, but the message was so therefore I went ahead with ahead it! Thank you for your kind words!
Sergi Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 7:00 AM
Hi Arthur: I admired your poem, especially the last stanza. "Share the waters of the pond with him". Great Write!
Sergi Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 7:02 AM
"Share the waters of pond with him". Great Write!
Bateman Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 3:44 AM
Hello Arthur, Congratulations on POTW!! Very Well-Done, Sir!! Merry Christmas, Gary
Vaso Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 12:31 AM
Thanks Gary, much appreciated!
Allison Avatar
December 13, 2015 at 2:30 PM
I'm itching to say congrats on poem of the weeeeekkkkkkkkk :-) hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 1:26 AM
Thank you Jan, such flattery makes want to flea!
Y. Avatar
December 13, 2015 at 1:20 PM
Arthur, I'm delighted to see this piece get selected as poem of the week. Congratulations! Enjoy the honor:-) Alexis
Vaso Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 1:27 AM
I will and the 2 million dollar prize too!!!!!
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
December 13, 2015 at 9:09 AM
beautiful poem Arthur.. Shall I keep this as a fav?! :) Thank you...Congrats on being POTW ..God bless
Vaso Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 1:30 AM
You are so kind, and for sure Fav, unless you want an autographed original copy!!!!! LOL
Yvonne Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 8:59 PM
Great springboard excellent landing. A Fav!
Vaso Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 1:25 AM
Armand, as much as I am the Grinch, you are Santa Claus with such kindness!
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December 11, 2015 at 10:30 AM
A splendid piece my friend... deeply philosophical with superb phrasing and imagery. I am in total agreement with your sentiments. Best wishes, Keith
Vaso Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 9:23 PM
Thank you Keith! Very kind of you.
Pinet Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 10:05 AM
This is very beautiful and so well penned. A totally different and interesting approach to life as viewed through your poetic eyes and brought to life by your artistic skills. Emile.
Vaso Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 9:22 PM
Thanks Emile, I had great inspiration from people here!
Macfarlane Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 5:18 AM
Excellent write Arthur, love the depth of emotion and inspiration. Hugs
Vaso Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 9:20 PM
Thank you so much Cecilia! Hugs right back
Chircop Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 7:11 AM
Your lines inspire my soul to savo(u)r each moment with your poetry...These are my fave. Lines - 'When a pond have no rippes, look for the lies underneath', 'Truth will always seek you out' ,'Never close your heart to a stranger's smole ',and those last lines,Oh to share those waters of my pond,to br promised fresh clear rainfall,love love your masterpiece ..You and Richard are both poets who inspire so much wisdom..A fave : ). .in exchange for a canoe ... : )
Vaso Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 2:18 AM
He is for sure, the jury is still out on me! But I still have my canoe! LOL hugs
Smith Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 2:36 AM
Lovely way to weave your thoughts around Charmaine's... So deep
Vaso Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 2:20 AM
Thanks Tim, sometimes its just comes, rarely , never the less!
Allison Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 2:17 AM
You are a very wise man Arthur - for personal reasons I really relate to the 4th stanza :-( Oh boy I'm itching after reading about that pesky 'flea' lol:-) as I've said many times before you are a creative genius my friend - love the fact Charma's poem inspired you to write this gem:-) hugs Jan xx 7 faves
Allison Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 5:14 AM
Oh I await with baited breath lol:-) hugs Jan xx Can't you get that flea to flee as this read makes me itch lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 2:25 AM
Thank you, maybe after writing about fleas I shall tackle cows next! Just an idea!!!
Onclaud Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 12:58 AM
enlightening insights from you, arthur... beautiful!..huggs
Vaso Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 10:01 PM
Thank you nette! No idea how I could have come up with all that!
Y. Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 11:53 PM
WoW! I enjoyed this piece and it's profound message. It's alot of wisdom in this write. Those last five lines were a WoW moment for me."When you see a human suffering. Flea not inside your reflection. Instead reflect upon his suffering .Share the waters of your pond with him. This shall promise you both more rainfall" This is what I call poetry in motion. This well written write can be life changing if you let it. Oustanding job ! :-) I'm a favin it and It's a big SEVEN:-)Alexis
Vaso Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 9:24 PM
well the idea "flooded" into my mind! LOL thank you so much!
Nance Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 11:42 PM
Wowee! Wonderful!
Vaso Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 9:23 PM
If you mean wonderful like you, then yes I concur!
Osho Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 11:17 PM
i loved it arthur
Vaso Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 11:20 PM
Thank you so much, I was so happy that I got the inspiration from others here!
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