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A Brewing Storm

anger, anxiety, fear, howl, natural disasters, nature, seasons, A Brewing Storm © Thunder and Lightning, ‘Me Oh My’! Blasts and ‘vamps’ its warring symbolic call Ceiling clouds roll in a ‘smoking’ broil simmer Pressures build, stirred to exploding crescendos Light-bolted charges sent to spike a ground Heavens open and release bright fire bolts down Blackness is now showing cut sliced silvery veins Few if more 'rests' between a signature storms charge Will stay the night for a short reprieve to woo us into not Sending in their hushes before the dramatic storm slammer Is its 'gift' of quietness for reflection to what comes next Beware, time to take a breath and watch and listen, listen!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/4/2015 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Skat A your comments are always so lifting, glad you visited, take care---didee
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Date: 6/3/2015 10:50:00 PM
Diane, I like the brewing thought ..... SKAT
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Diane M Quinlan
Date: 6/4/2015 8:27:00 AM
Me again...I took another look at the 'dramatic poem' which is the first time I have called any of my poems dramatic and felt it needed to be a wee bit more (dramatic) and so 'above' you will read where I made my changes. Thanks for guiding me to reread and revise!.....didee

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