A Breath Away

A breath away

The wind blew leaves by my window,
Scattered all over the soggy ground.
Cold rain quietly fell upon them,
Bare trees stood without a sound.
The dark skies and gray mountains
Make it difficult for one to think.
It feels like grief is hovering,
To spill the tears with a wink.
The heart has had enough of this.
Dark sky reminders of those I miss.
I sit, I reach, for the bright sunshine
That wrapped around me the other day.
Hidden in the layers of memories 
To choose for the mind to play.
Feeling the warmth, the touch of your hand.
Is only a breath away from me, I stand. 
To do what you know I can do best.
Move forward in light of the rest.

Heidi Sands
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Onclaud Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 1:21 PM
i enjoyed this expressive piece, breathtaking, heidi..huggs
Sands Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 1:37 PM
Thank you so much Nette :)
Pennell  Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 8:52 AM
paints a picture and carries some emotion stephen
Sands Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 8:58 AM
Thanks Stephen. I hoped to do that. :)
Turner Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 6:08 AM
Rainy days can work either way for me Heidi. Sometimes gloomy others happy. Loved your poem:)
Sands Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 7:48 AM
Thank you Daniel. I appreciate you visiting and taking time to comment. Also, good suggestion with the soup mail. Have a nice day. :)
Galgiani Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 10:42 PM
Emotions coming to height! 'Bear trees' I believe should be 'Bare trees'! Bear is a BEAR, you know in the woods...LOL rg
Galgiani Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 3:51 PM
Thanks Daniel for the tip on the soupmail. I most certainly will consider that next time...rg
Galgiani Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 3:49 PM
I don't know how many times I have done the same thing! I always appreciate the reader being a 'spell checker'...LOL rg
Sands Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 7:47 AM
Got it! Yes, I did mean 'Bare'. Maybe I was thinking whether the bear were going to come around with the new bird seed I put out for the birds ...lol
Turner Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 6:09 AM
Soupmail is the thoughtful way for corrections:)
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