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A Brand New Star

Somewhere in our galaxy tonight shines a brand new star
Dazzling, its brilliance pierces the ebony night
At journey’s end it has sailed rugged heights afar
And hangs this night with Sirius and Zenith reflecting light
~*~

12/5/'13

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Funom Makama

Date: 2/28/2014 11:18:00 AM

Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend

Timothy Jacks

Date: 1/15/2014 12:13:00 PM

Stars fall to bring us hope and new stars are born to show us the way. Awesome job. I hope you are well

Jack Ellison

Date: 1/13/2014 11:15:00 AM

I have missed you Annalise! You write so beautifully... and of course this is no exception! LOve and warm cuddly hugs XOXOX

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 1/9/2014 4:56:00 PM

Happy New Year to you Annalise :). In just four lines you've created magic my friend.

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/7/2014 10:50:00 AM

happy New Year love this wonderful poem

Joseph May

Date: 1/2/2014 10:36:00 PM

Hi Annalise, just stopping by to wish a Happy New Year to you and yours...love

Jack Horne

Date: 1/1/2014 2:00:00 PM

Just stopping by to enjoy this beauty again, my friend. Love to you both this NY xx

Karen Anglesey

Date: 12/29/2013 11:36:00 PM

Brand new star for a brand new year. I like that thought! Such a pretty poem also. Happy Happy New Year and may all your stars shine so very bright :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/27/2013 11:40:00 AM

a cosmic delight, annalise... you were of the first soupers who greeted me here when i was new and supported my efforts.. thank you so much for your guiding light.. my this season bring you more joy... enjoyed your soupy as well... huggs with love!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/24/2013 5:29:00 AM

- Beautiful poem, Annalise !!! - Happy Christmas - Have a great time with family and good friends! - Santa Claus huggs from // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2013 1:28:00 AM

Annalise, , Guess what? , The end of the year is approaching :) and there's no way I'm letting this year end, without dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTAMS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer