Jan Allison Poet Haiku

A Brand New Day Cq

as morning breaks
the dawn chorus
awakens me
with their sweet song

as twilight falls
black crows circle
over tall trees
and start to roost

Charlie-Quadku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Charles Messina
9/1/19

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2019 at 5:54 PM You and I both did ours on a "day" how cool!! Congrats for the well deserved win, Jan.

Paul Callus September 20, 2019 at 4:29 AM Two lovely contrasting images, Jan. Congratulations on your podium finish! Hugs // paul

Suzanne Delaney September 19, 2019 at 8:43 PM Congratulations Jan: My two favorite times of day perfectly described.

Constance La France September 18, 2019 at 11:33 AM Jan congratulations on your win, excellent **

Anne-Lise Andresen September 18, 2019 at 11:09 AM - Congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jeanne Mcgee September 18, 2019 at 8:14 AM I love the dawn chorus of sweet songs...congrats on your top win.

Charles Messina September 18, 2019 at 6:26 AM A nice way to start a day :) Excellent write Jan. Congratulations on your win. Nice imagery.. Hugs // Charlie xx

Eve Roper September 4, 2019 at 9:42 PM Great haikus, Jan. Good luck in the contest. Hugs

Janis Medders Tobechi September 3, 2019 at 9:56 PM Very lovely imagery. Good luck in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 1, 2019 at 5:19 AM - Beautiful written, Jan :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams August 31, 2019 at 6:55 PM beautiful contrast from sunrise to sunset, i could see this clearly....wonderful write for the contest :) hugs