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A Brand New Day Cq

as morning breaks the dawn chorus awakens me with their sweet song as twilight falls black crows circle over tall trees and start to roost Charlie-Quadku Poetry Contest Sponsored by Charles Messina 9/1/19

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2019 5:54:00 PM

You and I both did ours on a "day" how cool!! Congrats for the well deserved win, Jan.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/20/2019 4:29:00 AM

Two lovely contrasting images, Jan. Congratulations on your podium finish! Hugs // paul

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 9/19/2019 8:43:00 PM

Congratulations Jan: My two favorite times of day perfectly described.

Constance La France

Date: 9/18/2019 11:33:00 AM

Jan congratulations on your win, excellent **

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/18/2019 11:09:00 AM

- Congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/18/2019 8:14:00 AM

I love the dawn chorus of sweet songs...congrats on your top win.

Charles Messina

Date: 9/18/2019 6:26:00 AM

A nice way to start a day :) Excellent write Jan. Congratulations on your win. Nice imagery.. Hugs // Charlie xx

Eve Roper

Date: 9/4/2019 9:42:00 PM

Great haikus, Jan. Good luck in the contest. Hugs

Janis Thompson

Date: 9/3/2019 9:56:00 PM

Very lovely imagery. Good luck in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/1/2019 5:19:00 AM

- Beautiful written, Jan :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/31/2019 6:55:00 PM

beautiful contrast from sunrise to sunset, i could see this clearly....wonderful write for the contest :) hugs