Chris Green Poet Rhyme

A Brand New Day

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Another tired morning
as I roll on out of bed
Lingered thoughts of yesterday
still echo in my head

The sun is slowly rising
in the amber eastern skies
Yet I can barely move along
or open up my eyes

I pour a cup of coffee
in my favorite china cup
Hoping it will start my day
and help me to wake up

Then flip on my computer,
damn that light is way too bright
To see if there was something new
that happened over night

There before my weary eyes
a message had come through
I found a sweet good morning wish
was sent to me from you

When then I noticed right outside
as perfect as can be
A brand new day had just begun,
now waiting there for me

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Caren Krutsinger September 20, 2019 at 3:36 PM Optimistic and upbeat Chris. Chris Green September 20, 2019 at 3:49 PM Thank you Caren. I try to start each day with a smile, sometimes it works and sometimes not so much. Fortunately this morning was a good morning. :)

Hello There September 20, 2019 at 12:29 PM I have found that your words brighten my days. I'm glad you are finding some to brighten yours :) Chris Green September 20, 2019 at 1:14 PM Your wonderful comments always brighten mine, so thank you for your kindness my friend.

John Hamilton September 20, 2019 at 9:36 AM Very nice Chris I like it when you share your day with us, it does look like a great day, better now after reading this.HAGD Chris Green September 20, 2019 at 10:41 AM Thanks John, I hope you have a great day as well.

Heidi Sands September 20, 2019 at 9:19 AM This is a bright day. It also reminds me of my favorite coffee cups I choose to use. A nice reminder too that a day can start so special. Very nice :) Chris Green September 20, 2019 at 10:41 AM It sure can Heidi. Thank you my friend, hope you are doing well.

Sandra Adams September 20, 2019 at 9:15 AM it's always nice to wake to a brand new day, each a new adventure, but it makes it extra special when you are welcomed by a good morning ...love the way you penned this one, perfect rhythm, perfect poem to read while enjoying my second cup of coffee, the first is always hurried along...great poem my friend :) hugs Chris Green September 20, 2019 at 10:40 AM I am happy you liked this one Sandy. It just seemed like a good one for today. :)

Brenda Chiri September 20, 2019 at 8:40 AM Kinda sounds like a good morning suppers!;) lol see you cant stop!;) Chris Green September 20, 2019 at 10:40 AM Kinda, huh? : ) Well it is morning (for me) and it is a morning related poem so... Thanks so much Brenda. Someday I'll stop, just not yet. I appreciate you.