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A Brand New Day

~ Another tired morning as I roll on out of bed Lingered thoughts of yesterday still echo in my head The sun is slowly rising in the amber eastern skies Yet I can barely move along or open up my eyes I pour a cup of coffee in my favorite china cup Hoping it will start my day and help me to wake up Then flip on my computer, damn that light is way too bright To see if there was something new that happened over night There before my weary eyes a message had come through I found a sweet good morning wish was sent to me from you When then I noticed right outside as perfect as can be A brand new day had just begun, now waiting there for me ~

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/20/2019 3:36:00 PM

Optimistic and upbeat Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 9/20/2019 3:49:00 PM

Thank you Caren. I try to start each day with a smile, sometimes it works and sometimes not so much. Fortunately this morning was a good morning. :)

Hello There

Date: 9/20/2019 12:29:00 PM

I have found that your words brighten my days. I'm glad you are finding some to brighten yours :)

Chris Green
Date: 9/20/2019 1:14:00 PM

Your wonderful comments always brighten mine, so thank you for your kindness my friend.

John Hamilton

Date: 9/20/2019 9:36:00 AM

Very nice Chris I like it when you share your day with us, it does look like a great day, better now after reading this.HAGD

Chris Green
Date: 9/20/2019 10:41:00 AM

Thanks John, I hope you have a great day as well.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/20/2019 9:19:00 AM

This is a bright day. It also reminds me of my favorite coffee cups I choose to use. A nice reminder too that a day can start so special. Very nice :)

Chris Green
Date: 9/20/2019 10:41:00 AM

It sure can Heidi. Thank you my friend, hope you are doing well.

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/20/2019 9:15:00 AM

it's always nice to wake to a brand new day, each a new adventure, but it makes it extra special when you are welcomed by a good morning ...love the way you penned this one, perfect rhythm, perfect poem to read while enjoying my second cup of coffee, the first is always hurried along...great poem my friend :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 9/20/2019 10:40:00 AM

I am happy you liked this one Sandy. It just seemed like a good one for today. :)

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/20/2019 8:40:00 AM

Kinda sounds like a good morning suppers!;) lol see you cant stop!;)

Chris Green
Date: 9/20/2019 10:40:00 AM

Kinda, huh? : ) Well it is morning (for me) and it is a morning related poem so... Thanks so much Brenda. Someday I'll stop, just not yet. I appreciate you.