A Boy With Gloves

The child’s mother hands him a pair of gloves and helps him to insert his fingers. Grimacing, he misses mittens! Pulling off the gloves, he puts each hand in a pocket. Fingers move warmly together – snug and glad now. The boy smiles. Jan. 5, 2023 Of What Use Are Gloves To Fingers That Only Understand Mittens Poetry Contest Sponsor: John Lawless
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Warlov Avatar
January 14, 2023 at 5:12 PM
Masterful explication and juxtapositions, but may I suggest presentation without punctuation. The lines suggest naturally the proper musicality. Possible subject/predicate confusion but that's the fun of it! - "Grab it by the smooth handle". - Ben Franklin ~ [FAV]
Warlov Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 11:16 PM
Only that you could test it ( see it) first. Not hoping to improve Iambic Pentameter.
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 1:22 AM
Sorry, Robert, in most cases (except haiku, etc) I just can't NOT punctuate. but I am so glad you liked this anyway.
Hawley Avatar
January 11, 2023 at 6:01 PM
Great story there you told.
Ferry Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 5:54 PM
Not bad! But where i grew up our gloves had no fingers .
Bauer Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 10:32 AM
This is wonderful, Andrea! It rings so true…
Buhagiar Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 2:55 AM
You are a great poem, Andrea. You get great ideas for these contests. Best for a win. Hugs.
Daniel Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 8:39 PM
Simple, yet unique, Andrea:)
Buehler Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 11:40 AM
Your poem is beautifully crafted, Andrea, and the child's joy and relief at just using his pockets, are so well conveyed. Good luck in the contest. :)
Kendrick Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 11:11 AM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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