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A Boy, a King

selected when but a child ruddy face and handsome, he, short of stature, manfully used the sling to great effect in wilds, protecting flocks from the beasts caring for the last, the least numbers swelling, they increased providing bounteous banquet feasts using sling, a stone he threw aiming well, yes, aiming true careful placed, a giant slew epic win for king, for country too hero on the battlefield courageously, sword did wield to his men's hearts, he appealed claimed high ground on bloody killing fields poet, gifted with the lyre soothing words reduced king's ire breathless verses to inspire strong laments when times were hopeless, dire kingly, noble, well adept loved the law, the precepts kept like his fathers, he too slept forty days, the people mourned and wept ---------- for the Lind30 Rhyme Poetry Contest sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke written on 03/18/2022 syllables checked by HowManySyllables.com

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Date: 4/15/2022 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful/creative write. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............
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Date: 4/14/2022 9:23:00 AM
great use of the new lind30 form to narrate events in the life of David. Congratulations, Jeff.
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Date: 4/14/2022 5:30:00 AM
A wonderful tribute for the beloved King David, the man after God’s own heart! Congratulations!
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Date: 4/13/2022 9:40:00 PM
Great story on King David. Perfect rhyme and rhythm. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/18/2022 10:16:00 AM
wonderfully crafted lines, Jeff. the rhythm shed more enchantment on your great poem. Best wishes for the contest and thanks for your visit and comment on my page.
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