Lukas Ficklin Poet Pantoum

A Bottle Full of Echoes

A pale moment to reflect everything...
Any recess in our past lifetime
~~A memory is creating ~~
preserved in a bottle with sweet sublime

Any recess in our past lifetime
and beauty from hereafter was
preserved in a bottle with sweet sublime
in an infinite blink of us

And beauty from hereafter was
confiscated without any thoughts
in an infinite blink of us
as we bathe in our future naughts

Confiscated without any thoughts
today will deliver tomorrow
as we bathe in our future naughts
tomorrow will bring a faint echo

Today will deliver tomorrow
~~A memory is creating~~ 
tomorrow will bring a faint echo
A pale moment to reflect everything...

6/7/2017
What will tomorrow bring contest
Pantoum Form  

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Afzal Nusker July 31, 2017 at 10:56 PM A great poem artistically crafted.

Eve Roper July 4, 2017 at 8:56 PM Congratulations on your win, Lukas, thank you for entering my contest ~*

Connie Marcum Wong June 14, 2017 at 7:24 AM You did well with this difficult form Lukas. Best wishes, if for the contest. I have never successfully written in this form. : )