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A Bottle Full of Echoes

A pale moment to reflect everything... Any recess in our past lifetime ~~A memory is creating ~~ preserved in a bottle with sweet sublime Any recess in our past lifetime and beauty from hereafter was preserved in a bottle with sweet sublime in an infinite blink of us And beauty from hereafter was confiscated without any thoughts in an infinite blink of us as we bathe in our future naughts Confiscated without any thoughts today will deliver tomorrow as we bathe in our future naughts tomorrow will bring a faint echo Today will deliver tomorrow ~~A memory is creating~~ tomorrow will bring a faint echo A pale moment to reflect everything... 6/7/2017 What will tomorrow bring contest Pantoum Form

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Date: 7/31/2017 10:56:00 PM
A great poem artistically crafted.
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Date: 7/4/2017 8:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Lukas, thank you for entering my contest ~*
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Date: 6/14/2017 7:24:00 AM
You did well with this difficult form Lukas. Best wishes, if for the contest. I have never successfully written in this form. : )
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