A Book Dedicated To You

I wrote a book created in Love... dedicated to you What more could I say... tell me what more could I do? In matters of love, I was always the giver In matters of affection… you never delivered You continue to blame my actions of a distant past A past when our foundation wasn’t even cast Yet, I accepted it and tried to prove my fruitfulness I gave my all to prove I’m faithful, to prove my truthfulness In return, I received constant slaps in the face Resistance, brick walls, and distance With you, I was always on a chase You never really had to put much work in It's partly my fault that I was never on the receiving end Considering it’s been this way since we began I was constantly ignored...while all my love and soul I poured Into you… In your eyes I wished to be “the one” In my arms, I embraced and loved your SON Still, in me you saw a reason not to trust... and even more reasons to run You opened my heart... and drove away pains of my past In the end I gained strength... so all was not bad In my heart love for you will always last… I wish I could say more… but my love and pain won’t pass I pray this heartbreak, our heartbreak… won’t long last… Lay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/9/2023 7:10:00 AM
Lovely penning Lay, so emotive and honest with good imagery and nice rhyme too. Take care, Gordon
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Date: 10/18/2012 12:28:00 PM
You are bearing and baring much pain I see in this write Lay.." I hope you stay strong and focused through this time. Do not be pushed down and also I say do not become bitter.." Yours Joe..)
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Date: 8/26/2012 11:16:00 AM
this one is very different from the last one I just read, so I don't know which poem is closer to your own truth, however, I really enjoyed reading this one and the emotions it shows us. I think the heartache does not last long with this kind of situation because the person was never a real love anyway. You cannot really miss what you never had!
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Date: 8/24/2012 1:21:00 PM
This was a very touching story/poem Lay - very well written - Hope you will find love again. - Have a beautiful weekend - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)
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