A Bomb Back To Vienna

Sooo, ya think you're THE ace
In this jingle jangle place, UHH!?
And you're proud, OOH, SOO proud !
And you're talking here so loud...
That nobody ever noticed
That you're offering a contest
With a weird melody
I would call cacophony...
If an English word exists
To describe your foolish lists !


O.K. Don't you cry like this
Or I would call you Elvis
For the rest of your life...
By the way, I met your wife
And I told her, once again,
How frustrated I remain
Every time I see your pages,
I wish I'd put these images
on my own imagination:
WHATCHA goo' job you done, son !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Guzzi Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 4:35 PM
Things that make you go hmmmm. Light & Love
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 12:02 PM
Hi, Debbie! Thanks for all your visits and much appreciated comments! Love, Hanitra
Horsman Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 6:00 AM
this is so powerful, and a wonderful poem....
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 8:36 PM
Hi, Harry; I just hope it's not too punchy for poor Vie! Blessings, Hanitra
Song Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 6:10 AM
Hanitra! You sure dropped a bomb on her! ha ha...Enjoyed the strong dialect in this one...someone in this collab is an excellent rapper! Keep the ink flowing! g.
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 8:39 PM
Thanks once more for stopping by my work.. On the way to pay a visit to your newest poems! Love, Hanitra
Lamoureux Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 10:11 AM
I like your style! Thanks for visiting my work. Have a good weekend.
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 8:50 PM
Thanks once more for the idea of writing Haiku in a different way: it's a new rhythm that will sure be successful! And the new name, Questionku, that you invented for it just refers to a universal quality of humanity: always questioning about anything and everything worth of it! Very interesting invention; your examples of Questionku are very good samples of your ...product:) Blessings, Hanitra
Johnson Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 10:22 AM
Your style exploded all over the page. Contemptuous praise with a touch of sarcastic rage. A sneaky little dig with back door harmony. You wrapped it up somewhere else beyond where I can see. :) Keep it going Voahan. :) Just kidding Hanitra. Have a good day new poet pal.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 1:11 PM
A great write once again hanitra, and I see you are new to the soup , welcome and keep up the good work xx
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