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A Bomb Back To Vienna

Sooo, ya think you're THE ace In this jingle jangle place, UHH!? And you're proud, OOH, SOO proud ! And you're talking here so loud... That nobody ever noticed That you're offering a contest With a weird melody I would call cacophony... If an English word exists To describe your foolish lists ! O.K. Don't you cry like this Or I would call you Elvis For the rest of your life... By the way, I met your wife And I told her, once again, How frustrated I remain Every time I see your pages, I wish I'd put these images on my own imagination: WHATCHA goo' job you done, son !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/12/2013 4:35:00 PM
Things that make you go hmmmm. Light & Love
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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/25/2013 12:02:00 PM
Hi, Debbie! Thanks for all your visits and much appreciated comments! Love, Hanitra
Date: 11/1/2012 6:00:00 AM
this is so powerful, and a wonderful poem....
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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 11/18/2012 8:36:00 PM
Hi, Harry; I just hope it's not too punchy for poor Vie! Blessings, Hanitra
Date: 10/28/2012 6:10:00 AM
Hanitra! You sure dropped a bomb on her! ha ha...Enjoyed the strong dialect in this one...someone in this collab is an excellent rapper! Keep the ink flowing! g.
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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 11/18/2012 8:39:00 PM
Thanks once more for stopping by my work.. On the way to pay a visit to your newest poems! Love, Hanitra
Date: 10/27/2012 10:11:00 AM
I like your style! Thanks for visiting my work. Have a good weekend.
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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 11/18/2012 8:50:00 PM
Thanks once more for the idea of writing Haiku in a different way: it's a new rhythm that will sure be successful! And the new name, Questionku, that you invented for it just refers to a universal quality of humanity: always questioning about anything and everything worth of it! Very interesting invention; your examples of Questionku are very good samples of your ...product:) Blessings, Hanitra
Date: 10/24/2012 10:22:00 AM
Your style exploded all over the page. Contemptuous praise with a touch of sarcastic rage. A sneaky little dig with back door harmony. You wrapped it up somewhere else beyond where I can see. :) Keep it going Voahan. :) Just kidding Hanitra. Have a good day new poet pal.
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Date: 9/30/2012 1:11:00 PM
A great write once again hanitra, and I see you are new to the soup , welcome and keep up the good work xx
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