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A Body, a Tree Premiere Contest Winner

A white sepal falls, it is of the early May bloom, it is of a blossomed tree that smothers with the light yielding weight of its insistence, that it will be stirred with the gentle wind. A bee can hover, intent on its hunger for the floweret's soft pink nectar. And the black body of the bee is a deep night, its dawn colored wings are a flutter of heart strings that are plucked by the sound of the children at their delightful play: shouts(orders); laughter(independence); a melody of youth sung as the spring birds weave a dance over the children's bodies. A deflated shiny balloon is the captive of the distant watchful trees with desert-red buds, whose limbs shape the faces of ancient spectres, seen through the snow tints of the wind blown petals milling an early May. May 2, 2021

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Date: 5/12/2021 2:03:00 PM
Jennifer - congratulations, really enjoyed your poem, especially "with the desert red buds, their limbs shape the faces of an ancient spectre" - well done! David
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Date: 5/12/2021 1:31:00 PM
Jennifer, congratulations. I've read this a few times and particularly like the linking / flow of imagery that takes the poem down different paths. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 5/12/2021 9:17:00 AM
A striking poem! Such exceptional wording + imagery. (For example: "deflated shiny balloon...captive of the watchful trees." ) Your top win, Jennifer, is most deserving. Congratulations! Brian
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Date: 5/12/2021 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/12/2021 6:53:00 AM
Beautiful. God bless you and Congrats. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/12/2021 4:38:00 AM
just perfectly worded, a sublime write..i particularly enjoyed the unusual imagery and strong closure to the poem - congrats on your 1st place win in my contest!
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