A Boatload of Lims

A boatload of lims I scribbled last night They came flying at me in a blinding light Overtaking my soul Had no control Eliminated the ones that weren't too polite © Jack Ellison 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Smith Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 2:20 PM
Pull anchor, set sail this boat of lims...it's going to be either sink or swim...let them float...won't sink the boat...cause I'm watching from the shore, your Limertim
Ellison Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 7:13 AM
Hey Limertim! Hope your Friday is bright and shiny... ours is dull and cloudy! But this is shaping up to be a mild autumn and hopefully, a mild winter as well! YEE HAW!
Eastman Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 2:15 PM
I only read to Dragon the loveable ones... But he has written plenty of them-es... So naturally here we comes... As Santa Jack takes funny on the runs... Afterall, he's written many a funny bunch of tons... Yep! I've turned into a kid or some sort of old youngun....
Ellison Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 7:09 AM
Have you kept track of how many of my poems you've reviewed??? Probably over 2,000!!!!!!!!!! YIKES! Now that's what I call a loyal friend!!! Love, Santa xxx
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