A Boat Without Its Oar

Many a days i spent lost in her thought,
and the nights fled by imagining her by my side, though there she was not ,
but still my heart beats everytime,
trying to match her's with mine, like  a synchronous  rhyme,
but just as the dawn breaks in,
a horrid reality sneaks in,
and emerges right back in my mind , that dreadful thought,
that i so wished would have  rather forgot,
the fact that shes there no more,
and my abandoned boat has now even lost its only oar!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/15/2015 9:45:00 AM
Am Ban :) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. Hope you had a wonderful Valentines day. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 1/31/2015 1:48:00 AM
Am Ban, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/31/2015 12:53:00 AM
Arn, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/26/2015 12:34:00 PM
- A warm welcome to the P Soup, Arn :) - Hope it will come many more poems from you in the future - Enjoy reading your first, a very well written poem - // Anne-Lise :)
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Arn Ban
Date: 1/26/2015 2:43:00 PM
thanks Anne :)
Date: 1/26/2015 7:52:00 AM
Well done Arnie, I loved it....Seren
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Arn Ban
Date: 1/26/2015 8:03:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 1/26/2015 7:19:00 AM
Nice Arnie, keep on going!
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