Andrew Crisci Poet Haiku

A Bluish Shine

Waterfall gushing
on moss-covered rocks, breaking
up a bluish shine;
tree dangling from wet boulder
crushes the ginger,
to deplete it of its light...
Waterfall playing
a scherzo, ever grant me
this sweet symphony...
 


Entered in Raul Moreno's contest, "Rhythm of the falls" 

Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci

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Sara Kendrick October 13, 2009 at 4:44 AM Nice descriptive write. Keep writing. Good luck in contest. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown October 11, 2009 at 9:19 AM I have read your amazing poetry today and enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing with us Andrew. I hope you are enjoying your weekend. Wishing you the best in the contest. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards October 11, 2009 at 7:55 AM Wow...this is wonderful...Raul will love this, I'm sure!! Best wishes...looks like a winning poem!! ~ Carrie

James Marshall Goff October 11, 2009 at 6:59 AM perfect image of Raul's picture! Andrew!... jim

Carolyn Devonshire October 11, 2009 at 6:18 AM Brilliant imagery, Andrew. The reader can truly see the tree crashing and hear the symphony of the falls. Very nice! Love, Carolyn