A Blueberry Tale
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I’m going to sea in a blueberry boat,
The murky coastline looks like a root beer float,
The crested wave surges a dollop of cream,
Awakes the most welcomed, instilled in their dream,
Friends wanted to go on a strawberry boat,
With a chocolate sail, they will eat till they bloat,
I told them to wait, for beyond this great sea,
There are tastier treats, they'll not want to leave,
A reason why I've got a blueberry boat,
It's a bait to our treats, a lured feast to gloat,
It is a magic show, of untold measure,
There are loads and loads, of absolute treasure!
(***Sight still under construction)
2019 September 12
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12 lines x 11 syllables = a perfect 132 syllables
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