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A Blue Jay Sitting

a blue jay sitting

on a branch laden with fruit. . .

the dewormed apple


July 26, 2018

Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2018

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May 9, 2020 at 1:34 AM

Must have been an early bird! I think blue jays are my favorite bird, at least in appearance. I hear they are rather nasty in temperament! Maybe this one is happy now that he's well fed, haha! Great haiku, my friend.

August 5, 2018 at 10:13 AM

aha, - love it

August 1, 2018 at 9:34 PM

Excellent! So pretty!

July 30, 2018 at 2:07 AM

Nice poem, lucky blue jay.

Michelle Faulkner

July 29, 2018 at 1:19 PM

Congratulations, Andrea, on your delicious haiku!

July 28, 2018 at 5:31 PM

Excellent haiku. Congratulations on your win.

July 28, 2018 at 8:00 AM

Clever, I love the image it creates.

July 28, 2018 at 3:08 AM

So the early bird got the worm? Well done.

July 27, 2018 at 3:05 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your awesome win... Hugs Eve

July 27, 2018 at 12:05 PM

Andrea.. the only one smiling more than me is the blue jay, such a delightful image you paint!

July 27, 2018 at 8:19 AM

Lovely write Andrea..Congrats on your win

July 27, 2018 at 7:43 AM

Ah, Andrea, the solution to the "What's worse than finding worm in you apple?" question. Very nice Haiku

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

July 27, 2018 at 6:34 AM

Oh that's good :)) Congrats on your win! xomo

July 27, 2018 at 5:57 AM

Congrats on your win, Andrea.

July 27, 2018 at 5:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, I have seen blue jays do this to apples, nicely done!

July 26, 2018 at 10:15 PM

I thought I'd seen this but it was Nette,s, great minds think alike .

Caren Krutsinger

July 26, 2018 at 4:21 PM

I am so glad you aptly captured the blue jay's personality and sound in this haiku, Andrea.

July 26, 2018 at 3:54 PM

Good one, Andrea! Janice

July 26, 2018 at 1:36 PM

andie, we both took similar routes for this haiku...yours is much better!...huggs

July 26, 2018 at 1:20 PM

Yum, good one Andrea...

July 26, 2018 at 12:00 PM

Well written haiku, Andrea.

July 26, 2018 at 12:00 PM

Great descriptive Haiku :)

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