A Blue Jay Sitting

a blue jay sitting

on a branch laden with fruit. . .

the dewormed apple


July 26, 2018

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Date: 5/9/2020 1:34:00 AM
Must have been an early bird! I think blue jays are my favorite bird, at least in appearance. I hear they are rather nasty in temperament! Maybe this one is happy now that he's well fed, haha! Great haiku, my friend.
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Date: 8/5/2018 10:13:00 AM
aha, - love it
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Date: 8/1/2018 9:34:00 PM
Excellent! So pretty!
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Date: 7/30/2018 2:07:00 AM
Nice poem, lucky blue jay.
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Date: 7/29/2018 1:19:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea, on your delicious haiku!
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Date: 7/28/2018 5:31:00 PM
Excellent haiku. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/28/2018 8:00:00 AM
Clever, I love the image it creates.
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Date: 7/28/2018 3:08:00 AM
So the early bird got the worm? Well done.
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Date: 7/27/2018 3:05:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your awesome win... Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/27/2018 12:05:00 PM
Andrea.. the only one smiling more than me is the blue jay, such a delightful image you paint!
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Date: 7/27/2018 8:19:00 AM
Lovely write Andrea..Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/27/2018 7:43:00 AM
Ah, Andrea, the solution to the "What's worse than finding worm in you apple?" question. Very nice Haiku
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Date: 7/27/2018 6:34:00 AM
Oh that's good :)) Congrats on your win! xomo
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Date: 7/27/2018 5:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Andrea.
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Date: 7/27/2018 5:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, I have seen blue jays do this to apples, nicely done!
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Date: 7/26/2018 10:15:00 PM
I thought I'd seen this but it was Nette,s, great minds think alike .
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Date: 7/26/2018 4:21:00 PM
I am so glad you aptly captured the blue jay's personality and sound in this haiku, Andrea.
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Date: 7/26/2018 3:54:00 PM
Good one, Andrea! Janice
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Date: 7/26/2018 1:36:00 PM
andie, we both took similar routes for this haiku...yours is much better!...huggs
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Date: 7/26/2018 1:20:00 PM
Yum, good one Andrea...
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Date: 7/26/2018 12:00:00 PM
Great descriptive Haiku :)
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Date: 7/26/2018 12:00:00 PM
Well written haiku, Andrea.
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