A Bloody Mary

Ole Bloody Mary’s a friend of mine
with splash of vodka and twist of lime.
tomato crush
which makes me flush,
yet, she leaves me out of sorts at times.

Contest: Pick a Beverage any Beverage
Date: 10/29/11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 11/8/2011 9:50:00 PM
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Date: 11/7/2011 9:28:00 AM
LOL, good one! Thanks, Deb - enjoyed the contest
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Date: 11/6/2011 3:22:00 PM
Very inspiring...maybe this is what I need! Hi Debbie, was looking at your haiku contest and now I am totally confused whether it is 5,7,5 which makes 17 syllables if I recall correctly you are requiring 14?? Thanks Julie
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Date: 11/4/2011 5:44:00 PM
Good luck in the contest...Reads like a winner to me...Interesting beverage..Sara
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Date: 11/4/2011 11:05:00 AM
Very nice ! and the poems not bad either :)
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Date: 11/2/2011 1:59:00 PM
I could use one now! Tobasco? Celery? HA!
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Date: 11/1/2011 8:10:00 PM
You did very well here, Debs. Did it not place? Darn!
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Date: 10/30/2011 12:25:00 PM
emm..interesting piece...nice diction...
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Date: 10/29/2011 9:17:00 PM
Beautifully penned on bevarage,Debie.Pls see soup mail
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Date: 10/29/2011 7:47:00 PM
* “Ow * I Love This Bloody Mary * The Twist of Lime & Yesss * A Sweet Bite Out of That Red Tomato Afore I Crush It With My Tongue * Completely Intoxicating Verse Dear Beautiful Debbie * Definitely A Joy to Sort Through * Luv * Sarah.” *
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Date: 10/29/2011 7:37:00 PM
Delightful. I do love them for breakfast.
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Date: 10/29/2011 6:37:00 PM
LOL Just have one Bloody Mary at a time and drink slowly. Very cute entry for Francine's contest. Best wishes for success, Deb. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/29/2011 6:03:00 PM
cheers! (and don't sweat the outa sortsness... is a ying thing ;) )
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