Debbie Guzzi Poet Limerick

A Bloody Mary

Ole Bloody Mary’s a friend of mine
with splash of vodka and twist of lime.
tomato crush
which makes me flush,
yet, she leaves me out of sorts at times.

Contest: Pick a Beverage any Beverage
Date: 10/29/11

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Andrea Dietrich November 8, 2011 at 9:50 PM soupmail

Jack Horne November 7, 2011 at 9:28 AM LOL, good one! Thanks, Deb - enjoyed the contest

Julie Heckman November 6, 2011 at 3:22 PM Very inspiring...maybe this is what I need! Hi Debbie, was looking at your haiku contest and now I am totally confused whether it is 5,7,5 which makes 17 syllables if I recall correctly you are requiring 14?? Thanks Julie

Sara Kendrick November 4, 2011 at 5:44 PM Good luck in the contest...Reads like a winner to me...Interesting beverage..Sara

Nick Bagnall November 4, 2011 at 11:05 AM Very nice ! and the poems not bad either :)

Jslambert Mister Roboto November 2, 2011 at 1:59 PM I could use one now! Tobasco? Celery? HA!

Andrea Dietrich November 1, 2011 at 8:10 PM You did very well here, Debs. Did it not place? Darn!

Prince Ekpemandu October 30, 2011 at 12:25 PM emm..interesting piece...nice diction...

Fabiyas M V October 29, 2011 at 9:17 PM Beautifully penned on bevarage,Debie.Pls see soup mail

Sarah Seraphin October 29, 2011 at 7:47 PM * “Ow * I Love This Bloody Mary * The Twist of Lime & Yesss * A Sweet Bite Out of That Red Tomato Afore I Crush It With My Tongue * Completely Intoxicating Verse Dear Beautiful Debbie * Definitely A Joy to Sort Through * Luv * Sarah.” *

John Smith October 29, 2011 at 7:37 PM Delightful. I do love them for breakfast.

Carolyn Devonshire October 29, 2011 at 6:37 PM LOL Just have one Bloody Mary at a time and drink slowly. Very cute entry for Francine's contest. Best wishes for success, Deb. Love, Carolyn

Nancy Jones October 29, 2011 at 6:03 PM cheers! (and don't sweat the outa sortsness... is a ying thing ;) )