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A Blissful Lifetime

Rowdiness drives though your eyes 
It builds a freeway, leading to consistent roads 
I can’t explain your stunning beauty, making my passion jam-packed
I can’t explain this heartfelt feeling inside—it’s so inconceivable  
Your nature is like a vermillion, impeccable rose; your scent is gratifying 
I can’t explain this addiction I have planted inside—I want to overdose 
On your genuine desires (that is most appealing)
That last a lifetime, pouring forth glee 
Upon my contemptuous sorrows and kisses 

Your tone of voice burns like a wildfire…penetrating me like crazy
It tears down the habitation that once existed and now gone
I can’t explain this fishy sensation plunging inside—it’s so absurd
Your nature reflects a treacherous passion like a whirling sea
I can’t explain this admiration I have drilling inside—caught in the waves of motion
Pounding lightly and ardently
It only lasts a few milliseconds… pouring forth notions
Upon my overwhelmed mind with gouges and blisses 

These excruciating scars left a mark
That lasts a century, accumulating my glory  

Running over my heart …tearing me apart…
Pounding me with affection…showing me the direction 
Where I could drive through the rowdiness of your eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/7/2014 1:01:00 AM
12th on the list: There's a painful playfulness about it that lingered even after I was done reading it. I like the use of simile to heavily express your feelings on the subject matter and, maybe on a bad day, I would have written something this beautiful as well.
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Date: 5/18/2014 5:25:00 PM
On my bad days, I don;t normally write that good, but thank you...this one is one of my favorites I've written. It's different and unique and was fun to write during my 9th grade year.
Date: 4/6/2012 9:10:00 PM
Dear David, An Extremely Well Written Free Verse YOUR Emotions clearly Seen Superb Pen, with LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Eternal Liege...HG - P.S. I am a big Fan of YOUR Sister Laura POETRY runs in YOUR Family Keep Writing...HG
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Date: 4/7/2012 1:58:00 PM
Thanks, HGarvey! :) Have a great Sat.!

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