A Blessing From Above

i travel further and further away
only wishing that i could've stayed
my heart tears apart
she is my masterpiece of art
i cant live without her
and i cant be sure
if she feels the same
so now i feel the shame
I feel my heart being torn
as though it was in thorns
i wish i could see her lovely face once more
i would let my heart pour
all the love i have for this girl
it throws my head in a whirl
i cant find any reason to hate her
and now i think i am sure
i am in love 
a blessing from above
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bond Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 8:06 PM
Thank you for all of your comments i do appreciate them and i will be posting new ones sortly thank you for your support
Hales Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 12:43 PM
perfect x
Sweetheart Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 6:48 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight..looking forward to many more..with luv..
Brown Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 5:11 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jamie. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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