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A Blessing From Above

i travel further and further away only wishing that i could've stayed my heart tears apart she is my masterpiece of art i cant live without her and i cant be sure if she feels the same so now i feel the shame I feel my heart being torn as though it was in thorns i wish i could see her lovely face once more i would let my heart pour all the love i have for this girl it throws my head in a whirl i cant find any reason to hate her and now i think i am sure i am in love a blessing from above

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Date: 8/16/2010 8:06:00 PM
Thank you for all of your comments i do appreciate them and i will be posting new ones sortly thank you for your support
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Date: 8/16/2010 12:43:00 PM
perfect x
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Date: 8/16/2010 6:48:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight..looking forward to many more..with luv..
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Date: 8/16/2010 5:11:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jamie. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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