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A Blessed Night

The night is pregnant and weather gets cheap dreams of distant fantasies even by the destitute void of pillows. Darkness becomes a loving father caring through oblivion’s wand. The day weight lifted for the night as tranquility texts the neighbourhood. Moonlight in an attractive gown showcasing on resting beings. Winter rains on non-melting snow condense air with nature’s cologne. Refreshing the lungs with the wonderful smell of wet fine sands of a new garden as the night yawns to spread its last blessing to make any sleep perfect under the fabric of a tender warm blanket.

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Date: 11/11/2016 5:50:00 PM
This poem puts you in the mood for dreaming. Love how you described what the night air smells like, a lot people have a tendency to focus on what you can see and leave it at that.
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Date: 5/24/2016 6:32:00 PM
Beautiful write... love the last three lines!
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/30/2016 9:37:00 AM
Thank you very much Chris
Date: 5/20/2016 4:07:00 PM
Beautiful....,tranquil, so! many special lines I love 'Darkness becomes a loving father', a special line, and 'Moonlight in an attractive gown'.
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/23/2016 11:57:00 AM
Thank you very much Kim
Date: 5/20/2016 10:35:00 AM
An excellent poetic description of a peaceful night, Funom. Imagery and personification enhance its beauty. #7 // paul
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/23/2016 11:57:00 AM
Thank you very much Paul

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