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A Black Swan

While drowning in a sea of sadness I drowned a sea of sorrows inside me. From the pools of ebony I emerge anew as... ...A Black Swan... ...for I have discovered black pearls hidden in shells of mysteries between myth and truth beneath a whirlpool of oblivion that whirls within my core. I will merrily swim through my tears and I will boldly soar over my fears for I have embraced my true essence as I have eaten those black pearls - the power of my discovered art that now rushes through my veins and gushes out of my heart as inky black blood. From my heart I will pour out the pain that will beautifully paint papers blank white with my doleful poems and songs. My quills are my feathers, I will shed while I dance unabashedly to the rhythm of my soulful tune. I will create art out of my broken heart before forevermore is forever gone. On a prickly stem of thorns a beautiful rose blossoms and sways. In a mine full of drab coals, under pressure and heat forms a shining bright diamond. Larva is what grows out to be a butterfly. From the womb of pain art is born. My sufferings cannot cage me anymore for I am... ...A Black Swan. Date: 08/29/2022 Note: For the contest (Free Verse - Old Or New) by Joseph May. *Placed First*

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Date: 4/14/2023 2:13:00 AM
Hi Afzal, this poetry is riveting, awesomeness pouring out of each line, pain blending to create art, beautiful, belated congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 12/5/2022 10:38:00 AM
You always find ways of speaking for many people using poetry. I love your poems. It doesn't matter how much pain we are going through,we should remain trapped in them.
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Date: 8/30/2022 6:46:00 AM
A riveting poem, Afzal, that embraces transformation when quills become feathers, when larvae morph to butterflies. (A transformation that merges with the poet's self.) A stellar write! Congratulations! Brian
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Date: 8/30/2022 9:54:00 AM
Thank you so much, Brian. I so appreciate your encouraging visit and praise.
Date: 8/30/2022 5:18:00 AM
BIG congrats on your TOP win, Afzal. A talented write!
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Date: 8/30/2022 6:16:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 8/30/2022 4:08:00 AM
WOW.!!!....and another....WOW!!! Spread those wings and soar Afzal.....and take us along for the ride.....
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/30/2022 6:15:00 AM
Oh John, thanks a lot. XOXO!
Date: 8/30/2022 2:45:00 AM
Congratulations AFZAL on your podium pole position victory. Yours is a towering and deeply evocative masterpiece. Superb imagery. I’m flattered by your insights on my entry. They will be used by me for growth Thanks Howard
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/30/2022 6:14:00 AM
Thank you...Howard, for such gracious compliments.
Date: 8/29/2022 7:07:00 PM
Wow! Wonderful! Congratulations!
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/30/2022 12:21:00 AM
Thank You
Date: 8/29/2022 6:54:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem, Afzal. A fav for me. Congratulations! A well-deserved win.
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/30/2022 12:22:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 8/29/2022 5:52:00 PM
From pain comes artistic forms with solful expressions, Wonderful write Afzal, Congrats on your win
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/30/2022 12:23:00 AM
Oh thank you Joseph, you just made my day.

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