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A Black Cloud

Lord, it is dark inside and darker out,
  and black thunderous rainstorms thunder by
blessing the tiller, the grower in drought
  but Lord, not all that rages is the sky.
Behold, I am drowning but not yet drowned,
  an ordinary man and nothing more
on a quest to find hitherto unfound 
  the heat of passion that begins the thaw.
In the sum of all hurt this I must bear -
  that I too have known the seasons of drought,
and washed am I in a cold bath of fear
  by life’s flood of tears and love’s well of doubt.
Still the ground I till lays fallow and torn
but for the pricking briar and piercing thorn.


                 Written: July 1997
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Parker Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 7:40 PM
Love to see your 2024 reflection poem on this poem. Outstanding work, KT.
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October 11, 2024 at 7:45 PM
The clouds are still there. Thanks Arlo.
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