A Bitter Brew

Thirst creeps over an exhausted soul, 
Staring at a bottle of madness. 
Labeled insanity's origin, 
A mixture of flavors so callous. 

Bitter undertones brewed deep within, 
Hatred harmoniously ferments. 
A dash of anxiety mixed in, 
A pinch of disdain to complement. 

Anxious fingers crack open a brew, 
A refreshingly cold hiss escapes. 
Eyes widen, dry lips happily curl, 
A vile tendency perpetuates. 

One sip of this evil elixir, 
Releases the demons deep within, 
Corrupting a once innocent heart, 
Let delinquent decisions begin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Thorn Avatar
January 7, 2013 at 10:05 PM
The perfect poem that describes my ex-husband - an alcoholic. The alcohol definately bought out the evil in him...
Guzzi Avatar
January 6, 2013 at 6:31 PM
Nice to read your darker write this eve. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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December 19, 2012 at 10:01 PM
Mest, congratulations on giving Tracie, "What she rEaLlY rEaLlY WaNt-ed"..lol... always~ PD.....
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 6:36 PM
a bitter brew indeed. this is an original poem! congrats on your win.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 4:32 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Mest xx
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