A Bit Soon

Oh how I've realized my love,
That it consumes me like flame, 
Burning in my soul,  
Without the scarring pain,
Oh how you've held me softly, 
To wipe my tears away, 
You hush my worries, 
And love me all the same. 
Oh how I've fallen,
Like an angel from the sky,
Into this beautiful blessing,
A love that is this solid,
Oh how I get this nervous flutter,
When possibilities arise,
Are these signs of what we think,
Or am I just a sissy crying 
Oh but I can think of no better pleasure
Than to create this love with you forevers
And if your child rests and grows within my womb
I will be happy even though It is a bit soon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Tacito Avatar
October 26, 2013 at 9:58 PM
What a powerful, embedded promise. The genuine shedding of heart's walls really came undone and shined so brightly. Awesome piece!
Loveless Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 7:58 AM
Thank you so much!
Breidenthal Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 11:10 PM
Touching verse here. Such dedication to the one you love. Always loving your work, Laura
Anglesey Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 6:31 AM
Sometimes love makes us want it all right now.. you've expressed the emotion perfectly :)
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